ElectraHeart

Hello, Suzette here to review! (I might be a bit rusty so please excuse me.) Okay, first stanza. I like this, I'm getting a feel for what the rest of ...

Suzette here to review! Okay so I haven't reviewed in a while so forgive me if I am a little rusty. Originally I knew that I did need to review ...

SuzetteTheHipster Here to review! First, this is so cute! I absolutely smiled when I read this. I'm going to break this down, line by line! First line, between "used" and ...

Hello! Suzette to review! Okay first I've read this a few times and debated on reviewing it or not and I decided that I might as well, because like I ...

Suzette here to review! So in the first stanza, the last two lines seem a bit awkward and strange. I think maybe you could reword it. Other than that the ...

Hi there, Suzette to review! Okay here we go! First, I must say I enjoyed reading this but, I have an insane headache and the font did not do anything ...

Hello, I'm Suzette and I'm going to review you poem today! Okay so first, don't let any reviews of your writing offend you, they are just suggestions made by fellow ...

Hello! I'm Suzette and I'm going to review your poem! Okay, I really love the first stanza because it kind of tells you what this poem is all about and ...

Hello! Suzette here to review! Okay so let me start out with I LOVE THIS POEM! It's very good and gets your point across very well and I just love ...

Hello! I'm here to review for ya today! So I mostly likes this poem but what bothers me is that the whole first part is either missing punctuation or is ...

Hello! Sarai here to review! Okay so I like your poem, it's well written and flows nicely! I did have a few problems though. I see you used "I" many ...

Hello, here to review. Okay, Happy Review Day! I like this poem. But I do have some problems, it could use some punctuation, I think that it would make the ...

Hello, here to review! Happy review day! Okay so I really like this. First, I would love to see some punctuation in this, I think it would make it flow ...

I’m here to review! So I saw no problems with this and I really like this poem. My favorite thing about this poem is how real it is. Because now ...

Hi Secrete! This is one of my favorites of yours, in fact I read it quite often. Me and our friend Emma used to sing the title of this song ...