ERZA

Wow such a energetic poem its more like a hymn of sorts though its as if after reading it for five times(maybe) I will hum it with some tune....there are ...

Hey I will be your reviewer today.... First lets talk about the basic concept of this poem...like what it makes me feel about it.... This poem so surely in a ...

Hello!!I will be your reviewer today.... First let me point out some basic things..... Punctuations.....you have punctuated this halfhazardly and it could be improved..... Division of stanzas.....you

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This is a real intriguing piece..I am interested in this.... So..I will review this YAY!! Let me start by saying this is one h** of a song...I like it very ...

Such a beautiful song you have wrote.... Hey, I am ERZA and since I liked your song I am going to review it.... The first thing I liked is that ...

This is a lyrics rigjt?? The ones that are supposed to be sung?? If this is a lyrics of a song or something then it certainly is not that much ...

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This is a real intriguing piece..I am interested in this.... So..I will review this YAY!! Let me start by saying this is one h** of a song...I like it very ...

This is a real intriguing piece..I am interested in this.... So..I will review this YAY!! Let me start by saying this is one h** of a song...I like it very ...

Firstly, I really liked how this whole thing was expressed...everything is well is not in its best form though...this piece would only excel as a rap simply gives that rap ...

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Hi!I am going to be the third reviewer...anyways, this poem is so much overwhelming that it simply pulls you inside has so much expression...and really it has such an unique ...

Hi!I am going to be the third reviewer...anyways, this poem is so much overwhelming that it simply pulls you inside has so much expression...and really it has such an unique ...

Wow!!!!I Simply love the sound of this song....its amazing how you wrote it....I am a bookworm who madly loves how the books in the library I could sort of relate ...

Well, you have a nice poem in there. Each of the words in this poem holds a deeper meaning. Even though it is all simple it is beautiful. It has ...

It is a very nice poem for a newbie but hey you get better as you write more. Anyway, I will review your work today. Firstly, the basic layout of ...

Hmm...not bad for a newbie. Anyway welcome to YWS. I am here to review your work. Lets get started. This is a great poem no doubt but it needs some ...