ERZA

Wow! Superb poetry! I liked this very much. Now let me explain myself... What I liked... The sound of this poem. The feeling I get from it. The goosebumps I ...

This is beautifully written! I liked it very much. If I look at this properly, there is not much flaws in here as well. But you really need to sort ...

Wow some intriguing stuff you have got here I see mm hmm. Well over all its overall ok I guess seeing that this was from the supposed victim's point of ...

Hmm..nice story with a perfect first chapter you have done there! Pretty neat too! This chapter is pretty neutral kind of as it lacks much details and is very brief ...

Now this is a scary piece you have got here...but I think you took this too far...and as far as I can brother is so uncaring about his sister esspecially ...

Whew! The horror!! Such a creepy story..now I shall turn around and check twice if there is anyone behind me whenever I am out on the streets... this was like ...

Hey Hocks! Erza is back! Anyways on with the review... Basically (as far as I can see) this poem is like a list of what you are gonna do right?? ...

Hey hockeyfan! Erza is here to review your great story!! First of all I think this is a great story...the plot is different and so original. Also..the way that you ...

Wow nice imagination. It would be better if you put the authors note in a spoiler or something or write it in bold or italics. I will get straight to ...

Sob! Such a nice letter this one would make! Lol. Give this to her. I really liked your effort to do something for her. She must be proud of you. ...

Wow a very beautiful story! I absolutely loved your narration. Its so nice! You have presented this beautifully. It has a poetic and abstract touch to it too which is ...

Ooh! Another secret! Now I am wondering...what are all these secrets about? Each a different part and so unrelated. In this one I liked the last part very much. And ...

Ho! Such a nice piece you have written here. This piece is so different form the others that I have come across and right I am having some difficulty in ...

Woah major tingly suspense!!! Hey Vamp! I will be reviewing your story now. Firstly I absolutely loved the suspense with the right amount of romance. And also this was so ...

Hey Lizzie! Such a nice piece of narrative you have written. I really liked the way how you described the scenes unfold. But I could not picture anything in my ...