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Re: Thank you...
Hi there! I'm E and I'm here to do a quick review of your piece! Lets get started: First off, I have to admit that I love the topic of ...
Jul 17, 2018 -
Re: love
Hi! I'm E and I'll be doing a quick review for your piece! Let's get started: So to begin, I must say I love one word titles. Love is just ...
Jul 17, 2018 -
Re: Pencil
Hi there! I stopped by to do a quick little review of your piece! I like how simple the piece is. It gets the point across, that every little stupid ...
Jun 7, 2018 -
Re: The Sculptor
Hi there! I'm here to do a review of your piece! To start, I'd like to point out what drew me to the piece, which is the title and the ...
Jun 7, 2018 -
Re: 1950's House Wife
Hi there! I had the same problem with the spacing. all you have to do is press enter between each stanza, and then put a space or a period there ...
Dec 5, 2017 -
Re: Dearer as they Fade
Hi! I really like this poem, and my favorite line was the last one. I like how you used "till" instead of still, I think your word choice is very ...
Nov 25, 2017 -
Re: Definitions
Hi! Stopping by for a quick review! To start, the poem flowed really well. It was easy to read and the rhyme scheme worked well with the poem. I think ...
Nov 25, 2017 -
Re: a burst of affection from sixth grade
Hi! Stopping by for a quick review. I love the first line. Like love it. I think the piece as a whole is very innocent and pure, and it just ...
Nov 25, 2017 -
Re: Sonder
Hi! I'm just stopping by for a quick review! I really liked the simplicity of this piece. My favorite lines were the ones about the coffee and creamer, and I ...
Nov 22, 2017 -
Re: Burnt Out Stars
Hi! Just stopping by for a quick review. I really liked this poem; it seems like a simple love poem that we've all read, but the way you worded things ...
Nov 22, 2017 -
Re: I lost you, I lost myself.
Hi! I'm here for a quick review. The first thing I'd like to point out is that the feelings seemed genuine, which is good. I will however point out that ...
Aug 24, 2017 -
Re: 2am
Hi! Just stopping by fora quick review. I'm glad you posted some poetry, even though you're new. It's actually really good, so give yourself a pat on the back. The ...
Aug 24, 2017 -
Re: i n h a l e | e x h a l e
Hi! I'm here for a quick review! I really liked the style choices in this piece. I think its really powerful how you crossed off "to you" to represent a ...
Aug 22, 2017 -
Re: staying in the shadow
Hi! I'm stopping by for a quick reveiw! The first thing I noticed about your piece that I liked was the title. I think it was a good choice to ...
Aug 22, 2017 -
Re: I often think on these lonely nights.
Hi! I'm here to write a quick review for you! I love the idea of the piece. I think its a strong one, and the title really pulled me in. ...
Aug 14, 2017
