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  • Novel / Chapter » General, Fantasy Re: Alexy's Journal Entry

    Hiii Missy! Welcome to YWS!! Okaay lets start with the review shall we? Hmm, there's not much for me to review here about, because, its just a reaaly short diary ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: Blink

    Heyyooo!!! :D Okay, firstly I haven't seen Doctor Who so I have no idea what you're talking about. But I looove to read poems :D And mmay I say, I ...

    Jul 13, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Yellow Balloon

    Heeellooooo!! I'm your Secret Santaa!!! And here I am to review your work :) Well first off, let me tell ya, I loved this concept!!! I haven't read many stories ...

    Jul 13, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Dark *Revised*

    Hi there!! Wow its been quite a loong time since I reviewed. Here it goes!: First of all, I loved it! I really did. You have such an amazing way ...

    Jun 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Blue Skies

    Hi there! Welcome to YWS! Okay on to the review. Give me a few minutes to compose myself, thats what this story did to me :') Its really beautiful! I ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Politics, Realistic Re: World peace

    Hey Chakravarthi! Welcome to YWS! Okay first of all, you've done a good job over there with the content. Just a few typos here and there, but it can be ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mysterious Arrival

    Heyy!! Hmm, how to go about this story? First off I have to tell you, this is quite a story you've got there. Its different, really different. I liked it, ...

    May 25, 2013
  • Other » Dramatic, Other Re: Time

    Hii! Okay, first of all, its awesome even if it was posted in the spur of the moment :D It doesn't matter what you post, as long as it can ...

    May 23, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: death of midnight clan.

    Hey! :) Welcome to YWS! Okay, so this is a short chapter. But that's alright :D On with my review: Well, there's not much for me to review about other ...

    May 20, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Humor Re: The House

    Hii! Welcome to YWS! I liked this story a lot! Its completely different than anything I'd read here! Usually a supernatural story ends, well, supernatural-y :D But I did not ...

    May 19, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Among the Moonlight

    Hello! Welcome to YWS!! :) First of all I'm a sucker for paranormal stories :D I just love them! Although, a lot of people say, they're fed up with vampire/werewolf ...

    May 19, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Whisper

    Hello! Welcome to YWS! The story has lots of potential, it is pretty interesting. I like the characters but I feel you could have described them a bit more. Like ...

    May 19, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Realistic Re: The Underchair Letters (Chapter Two)

    Hey! I'd already reviewed the first chapter and here I am to review the second one! Okay, so first of all this just keeps getting better and better! I'm really ...

    May 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Workaholic

    Hello! Review time! :D Okay, this is a pretty strong piece, you managed to convey your anger and hurt very strongly. A pretty good topic. You've written it in such ...

    May 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: Infectious- prolouge

    Hi! I really liked this chapter! Pretty good for a prologue!! :D I actually felt a little shiver while reading this :D Good job with the zombie theme. Its pretty ...

    May 17, 2013


The grand in the hotel rings with broken tunes; the guests frown; the concierge winces. But the blue-hatted boy is happy and braver than they.
— TheMythMaster