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*resists urge to smack something* yes. finals. they stink. Like a dead skunk.

Have it be the main subject of the poem instead of just being tacked on at the end. It's just a suggestion...

*falls out of chair laughing* I love it!

I liked this. Nothing really stands out to me that needs fixing... but for anyone that would like to see the orginal format, you can just click on the quote ...

*reads the super long sentence and falls over in a faint* And now the competition is fierce... too fierce for me... *glances at the sentence again* gah...

I thought that 'Besses' and 'tresses' rhymed... :shock: Nicely done, Jennafina. It definately made ME smile.

Wow... I like the idea behind this alot. The opening really caught my attention and I loved the second stanza. You did a wonderful job of capturing the thoughts in ...

I thought I'd already posted on this, but apparently not. I just thought I'd drop by and tell you how much I loved this. It really put an interesting point ...

Oh wow... it's been a long time since I posted this... I should warn you that this is by no means finished... it's got some 20-something chapters and was orginally ...

Um... *looks for the smilie she made once that said "this was sick and twisted"* *stops as she realizes that the author probably knows that already and how unhelpful that ...

I have to say, I never thought that unlocking a door could take so much effort... but this made me smile. I could have done without the swearing myself, but ...

*blinks* wow... very interesting... *rereads in and starts to laugh* *decides she must go to bed because she is finding this far to funny* nicely done, Snoink

This was short and sweet. I'm not much of a poetry critiquer (I don't even know if that's a word), but I just had to drop in and say something ...

*laughs* first off, love the story. It really made me laugh. Secondly, I love the way you interact with your sister, J. Haux... it's very cute... almost reminds me of ...

No problem. I sort of figured that it was based on something, so I debated whether to say anything at all, but I thought I might as well make the ...