Princess Besses
There once was a princess named Besses,
Who had the most glorious tresses.
She was always aware
Of her voluminous hair
That caught when they zipped up her dresses.
Besses is suposed to rhyme with dresses, by the way.
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YaY!!
cool and funny limerick Jenny.
"Tresses" is an old fashioned word for locks of hair, I guess...
Cute limerick, Jenna. You amuse me.
No duh Bessess rhymes with and tresses dresses...
if it didn't it wouldn't be a limerick... it would be... a limer-fraud
*GASPS*
And what he heck's a tress?
And Nate looked this over... psh!
I like it, there's not much else to say except I also thougth Besses and tresses rhymed.
Excellent! Nothing else to say.
I thought that 'Besses' and 'tresses' rhymed...
Nicely done, Jennafina. It definately made ME smile.
Coolie. You may want to reconsider
There once was a princess named Besses,
Who had the most glorious tresses.
Because the second line is off a little and they don't rhyme. Good though!
Okay! And now its my contest entry. Did I get the date right?
How are you pushing your luck? I did the same thing, and no one hated me (at least, noone had the audacity to tell me lol!). People probably hated me for submitting Onomatopoeia...
I think it's great--lots of fun. It's a limerick--what else can I say? 
~Jacquie~
It's fun and cute. ^___^ And so true... *glares at long hair*
I like it.
Limericks are fun. Childish, but in a good way. I like it. Sorry I don't have much else to say.
lol it sounds like it's suppose to be in a fairy tale book...if thats what you were looking for its pretty good....but if you were looking for sumthing else....YOU FAIL lol sry but yeah