Dulcet

Oooh, many revelations in this part. This especially: I decided to withhold the small detail that I am, or rather was, the crown princess Amaya Naveen Kasdhiel of Empyrean City. ...

What I would give to have a family like Braylie's, lol. It's so tight-knit; you did such a wonderful job of showing their warm relationships with each other! I haven't ...

Aw yisss, romantic teen fiction is my jam. I skimmed through your LMS thread and boy, I'm excited to see where this goes. I am so ready for Braylie's dad ...

“I’m…fine.” I answered still completely bewildered. “Well miss fine, if you wouldn’t mind helping me get dinner ready? We are eating chili and I still have to put it all ...

Ayyy I'm back. Sorry if you didn't want me back lol, but let's just jump straight into it! “Hey Joe,” He nodded to me pausing for a second, “Miss.” “Kieran ...

Yooo, I saw the third part of this in the Green Room and figured I'd read the first two parts before getting to that one. After reading this intro, I ...

I demand the next chapter right now, please.

Hey there, Imelda, and welcome to YWS! I'm a sucker for romances, especially those written for teens, so I'm here to give a quick review on this piece, if you ...

Hi, jemming! I'm here to review this piece, if you don't mind. I'll get straight into it with dot points. asterisk I'm not sure what the beginning paragraph in italics ...

Heya, nightmarenoodles! I'm here to review this wonderful chapter, if you don't mind. I'll get straight into it. asterisk The format reminds me of a Twine , if you're familiar ...

Heya, 14fancycheer! I'm here to review, if you don't mind. I apologise in advance if this isn't very helpful - I'll just give a few of my thoughts and be ...

Heya, CrimsonAngel, Dulcet here for a review. I apologise in advance if I'm not too helpful, but I'll keep this quick. Just a few notes from me and I'll be ...

Heya, superboy! I'm a bit late, but welcome to YWS! Since you're relatively new, I'll tell you that if you need more reviews from other people, this forum section is ...

Heya Murphy, happy Review Day! I'm here to give a review on this berry fine piece for Team Cranberries, if you don't mind! You've got a mighty good premise here, ...

Hey there, Ghost, here's a belated welcome to YWS! I'm here to give a review, if you don't mind. I'm still trying to figure out my review style, so I ...