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Re: Blurb for my novel
hey hey, Ducklin here for a review! Let's get started, shall we? "In a land not far away, in a time that wasn’t quite that long ago, there was a ...
Jun 19, 2021 -
Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 18.2]
Hey hey! Ducklin here for a review, let's get started shall we? Okay we straight make a skip to a part of this chapter that relly made me wheeze “So,” ...
Jun 19, 2021 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 3
Hey Hey, Ducklin here for a quick review! Let's start, shall we? I have to start off by telling you how humanly and though realistic you made the dragons. It ...
Apr 13, 2021 -
Re: Sunrise After the Rain
hey hey, Ducklin here for a brief review!! let's get started, shall we? I have to start off by saying that your talent of describing things in a way that ...
Apr 13, 2021 -
Re: These Long Five Nights (Chapter 2 - Move)
hey hey, Angel! Ducklin here for a quick review, let's get started, shall we? So first of all I really like your idea of the story to say it short, ...
Apr 8, 2021 -
Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 13.2]
Hey hey, long time no see Mordax, duckling here for a review! Let' get started shall we, I gotta be honest here I nearly found anything bad in this chapter, ...
Apr 6, 2021 -
Re: At Least
hey hey, Ducklin here! I'm here for a review so let's get started Raichu shall we? Actually, this isn't much of a review but more of me telling which parts ...
Mar 12, 2021 -
Re: The people's leader
Hey hey Illy! Ducklin here for a review Although this can't be considered as a real review, just me telling you how much I loved this poem. I adored the ...
Mar 11, 2021 -
Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 11.2]
Hey Hey Mordax! Ducklin here long time no see but I'm back, so let' get started. "The smell of ale and roasting meat wafted to greet her, and Rieka’s stomach ...
Mar 11, 2021 -
Re: Depression Cuts
Hey hey Yumi, Ducklin here for a review! Let's get started shall we? Well I can't actually call this a real review since I won't be giving critique but only ...
Jan 20, 2021 -
Re: Cabalistic Corporations | Chapter 9
Hey hey Yoshi, Ducklin here for a review! Let's get started shall we? Minuses - So it's a realy interesting way of starting your chapter but (there is always a ...
Jan 19, 2021 -
Re: Set Adrift (Part 4)
hey cidrianwritersguild! ducklin here for a review, let's get started shall we? So first-off even if I didn't read the previous chapters I really likes the story line here. It ...
Jan 17, 2021 -
Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 5]
Hey Mordax! Ducklin here for a review, let's get started shall we? I think I have to agree with the other comments this was just deep writing that reads so ...
Jan 16, 2021 -
Re: i pray before i go to sleep but i don't know who answers them
hey hey! Ducklin here for a review, let's get started shall we? So the first thing I notices was something grammatically wrong, your "i" is typed small but should be ...
Jan 16, 2021 -
Re: Uncrossable Canyons
Hey Ducklin here for a review! Let's get started shall we? So first-off I really like the flow of your story. The words u used gave a clear view of ...
Jan 10, 2021
