hey hey, Ducklin here for a review! Let's get started, shall we?
"In a land not far away, in a time that wasn’t quite that long ago, there was a knight, a lady in waiting and a milk maid."
I'm gonna be honest here if this Is the first line of a blurb for a book I pick up I think it would be a children's book or a bedtime story to try to make it more intriguing.
"The knight was a well-known chivalrous, brave warrior, with a heart that longed for the companionship of another person.
The lady in waiting was that companion imagined by the knight, but who – unfortunately – had loved him in the past as well, and no longer saw him in the same light."
This part does grab my attention it's a good description for both characters and makes you want to find out what their past love life was or what they have together.
Overall this is a pretty good book blurb so well done! That's all for this review.
Keep safe and keep on writing,
Greetings
-D.
Points: 154
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