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Re: Best Buddies to the End
Heya! Lovely lyrics. It was so emotional. You clearly got your pain across in a way that made us all feel your pain. Most of us can probably relate to ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Imagine That
Heya! I really liked this poem. Your use of Imagine that when these things do happen. It shows that how sad things are and how they shouldn't be happening. I ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Mishap of Harry
Heya! So, I enjoy this kind of humor. Alot. I really liked this poem. I enjoyed the straight forwardness. Well done. This humor seems to be the target market for ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Marionette
Heya! So listen, this poem did have a dreamy calm impact on my mood. I was just waiting for the creepy part... Which never really came. Your description stated: A ...
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: Fire and Ice
Heya! Look I really loved this poem. The first stanza reminded me alot Robert Frosts version "Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice. From what ...
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: Celestial movement
Heya! Okay so I loved this poem. I've always loved Astronomy. How you described the stars gave them meaning and as if they were living graceful creatures. You showed us ...
Apr 18, 2015 -
Re: Another silent death
Heya! First off, Great poem. I loved it and the way you described it. Now for the nitty gritty part. "As he takes her hand, she breathes her last breath ...
Apr 18, 2015 -
Re: I Love Her
Heya! So, let's start off by saying that I fully support Gay rights. We are all human and even though I may not swing the same way you do, this ...
Apr 18, 2015 -
Re: Cleaning for Company
Heya! So listen, I enjoyed the poem. Quite alot actually. Gaki wrote about your metaphors. If they indeed were metaphors, well done. They were used in such a way that ...
Apr 18, 2015 -
Re: Firing Squad
Heya! So I would like to first of all say, I loved the poem. I could really picture it and most poets I have come across could not do that, ...
Apr 18, 2015
