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  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Silent Screams

    Hi Gcracker051595,here is Dark to review your poem! I really like the emotions mixed up here in your poem.The using of diction are so well-written and working as a great ...

    Sep 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Three poems for the truth.

    HI Frances,here is Dark to review on your poem! First of all,I like the theme/issue you want to point up here in you is quiet easy to understand because you ...

    Sep 9, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: sometimes I look at my hands and they are raw and numb

    Hi Persy,here I am to make my review on your poem. First of all, I think this poem is not merely a poet's imagination but more than lifting a social ...

    Sep 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Ode to a Jerk

    Hi there,thewriterinside-have a good day!So here I am to make my review on your poem. First of all,I really like the theme and what messages you want to convey to ...

    Sep 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: That Girl

    Hi there,lyricalrebel,so here I am to make my review on your poem! First of all,I like the theme here when you talk about a girl who doesn't like is all ...

    Sep 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Goodbye.

    Hi Hearts,here I am to make my review on your poem. First of all,I love the poem that tells the story about Louis and Lisa. Although it is not end ...

    Sep 7, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dreaming.

    hi,SonicRainboom! Here is Dark Knight to review your poem. I like your poem that is looks like a 'Daydream' here. With a good writing style, I found that there is ...

    Sep 7, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: The Necromancers Moon Chap 2

    Hi there,DKChris.Have a good day,so here I am to make my review on your story. First of all,I love your story here.I really enjoy reading fantasy stories especially about magic.When ...

    Sep 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Save them Now

    Hi there,arianaSarroyo here I am to make my review on your poem. Honestly,I really like the theme that emphasizes the dignity of humanity shows that you are very concerned about ...

    Sep 7, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Literature Re: Chapter 1

    Hi there, MaraRobin.Here I am to make my review on your story. I really like the theme you want to point up here.I was impressed with the style of language ...

    Sep 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Culture Re: Blank

    Hi,ALittleFallofRain what a great poem here you have! I love the themes you bring here to show the reader.I really like the element of symbolism/representative you use here.And I think ...

    Sep 6, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: House of Whispers: Chapter 1 - Voices in the Forest

    Hi,Liaya,here I am to make my review on your novel! P/S:This is my first review on YWS anyway :) I really like the entire story quiet interesting to read and ...

    Sep 6, 2013


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