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Re: Lamb of God.
Hi Farell,here is Dark to give review on your poem. I like the concept here.We are the little lamb and the evil was a wolf.Well,the wolves always hunt for food ...
Sep 19, 2013 -
Re: Rain.
Hi Dreamy,this is Dark to give review on your poem! First of all,I love how you use the rain to heal a heart; # From all my miseries and worries, ...
Sep 19, 2013 -
Re: David, David, What Have You Done For Us?
Hi EnigmaticSpirit,have a good day!So here is Dark to give review on your poem. David, David, what have you done for us?X 3 times in each stanzas.I love to repeat ...
Sep 19, 2013 -
Re: It's funny how sickness seeps into the body
Hi Deanie,so here is Dark to give review on your amazing poem! I love the impression and your thoughts about illness and pain. It looks quite funny in a lines ...
Sep 19, 2013 -
Re: Broken
Hi emim219,have a good day!So here is Dark to give review on our poem. I love the concept here,for sure.The first three lines really caught me eyes here; # To ...
Sep 19, 2013 -
Re: Mind over Me
Hi aouther2b,so here is Dark to give review on your poem. I like the style of language you use in your poem.And I also sense a theme in your poem ...
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: Tears of a broken record
Hi Ary,so here is Dark to give review on your poem. Firstly,I totally love the idea here.A prisoner who was jailed and judged unfairly. # I accused the bystander who ...
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: Little Lines For Santa
Hello qmj,so here is Dark(Son of Santa) to give review on your poem. First of all,this is the weirdo poem I ever seen in YWS.But I have no doubt that ...
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: Life Cycle
Hi mistielovesyou,have a good here is Dark to give review on your poem. Honestly,I like the theme you want to show up here.But I am a bit disappointed here with ...
Sep 17, 2013 -
Re: Choices
Hi Monsters,so here is Dark to give review on your poem. Giving a statement of choices is a creative theme here.And how you provides the meaning of the choices itself ...
Sep 17, 2013 -
Re: Stalking- sometimes it's good...
Hi umaima,so here is Dark to give review on your poem. I really like the poem written in narrative form. Where it is easier to understand and written in a ...
Sep 17, 2013 -
Re: Free
Hi Nargles,so here is Dark to give review on your poem. So, I was very fascinated by the themes in your poetry.Words of love is certainly something that often sweep ...
Sep 15, 2013 -
Re: My First Love
Hi lyricalrebel,so here is Dark to give review on your sweet-sad poem. The theme of love is certainly a theme that is often chosen and easily is also an expression ...
Sep 15, 2013 -
Re: The Monster Who Forgot How Too Monster
Hi Monsters,here is Dark to give review on your poem. First of all,I love this poem so much.There is something evil,but at the same time really amazed me here; #I ...
Sep 15, 2013 -
Re: The Mission of Life
Hi ajruby12,here is Dark to give review on your poem. Overall I am very satisfied and enjoy with your poem.A mission of life is something special here.You use your own ...
Sep 14, 2013
