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Re: What do you do?
Hi LittleCaroleen,Dark here to review your poem.Firstly,Happy review day! I like the questions that you raised in your poem.Some are true, that exists in my mind. It also makes me ...
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Re: Don't You Mistake Us
Hi robertsoad,here is Dark to give review on your translate(Since you translated this poem written by Vahan Terian. # Don’t you mistake us, with your wild and savage tribes, Our ...
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Re: Math Class
Hi ajruby12,happy review day,here is Dark to give review on your wonderful poem. Poem in the form of a narrative form always impress me to read.(Narrative poetry is a form ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Where in the world?
Hi EmilieHaugaard,happy review here is Dark to give review on your poem. Where is the world?-->This title 'compels' me to read just let me review in each stanzas! ;) #The ...
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Re: Shoes
Hi Jennya,here is Dark to give review on your poem. As the title is,the contains also unique.I like how to gives the characteristic of the shoes itself. with two eyes, ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: I just wanted--
Hello LittleCaroleen,here is Dark Knight to review your poem. Firstly,I tried to find the theme,so I think it is about 'love theme'; I don't want heartbreak, I don't want tears. ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Four Foot Three
Hi emmylou1995,here is Dark to give review on your poem. It is quiet lengthy -poem here,but it is okay I enjoyed reading all the part.I like a poem which is ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: I Cannot Speak For I Have Lost Words.
Hi rbt00,have a good day!Here is Dark to give review on your poem. I like the concept of your poem though it looked simple and comfortable.I am not surrounded by ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: These are the Children
Hi Auxiira,have a nice day.Here is Dark to give review on your poem! This is beautiful even you talk about their graves/death,really understandable and one of my favorite poems in ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Deleted
Hi ToSaferHarbours,here is Dark to give review on your poem! I like the theme you bring here.Very interesting and unique.Let me review in each stanza.But firstly,don't you think that your ...
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Re: The Abyss
Hi NBMowery,have a good day!Welcome to YWS :D Anyway,here is Dark to give review on your beautiful poem! Although the title looks very scary when it speaks of abyss, but ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Him
Hi defyingravity01,here is Dark to give review on your poem! Your poem is simple but very enthralling. The way you give expressions are very interesting and pleasing.The theme is maybe ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Untitled Work 4
Hi arianaSarroyo,have a good day!Here is Dark to give review on your poem. First of all,I like the theme you want to point up here,even though it is not so ...
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Re: Stretching Time
Hi emilyleigh,here is Dark to give review on your poem. I tried several times to understand your poem. Even in the first lines look a little less 'obvious' here.But I ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: "Follow Your Dreams"
Hi DragonLily,here is Dark to give review on your poem! First of all,I like how you want to point up the theme is quiet a sad ending when you stated ...
Sep 23, 2013
