Dragon99

Hullo Neverland. What a fascinating piece of work you have constructed here. First off I must say the visual style of it is very nice, fun to read. It adds ...

I quite enjoyed this, you are a great writer babygirl, and a great reviewer. If you want to see a sucky review well I'm about to write one:{P alright I ...

Hey there! Dragon here. This is a great poem, though I must admit it seemed to confused me. Asides from a few errors such as lowercase i's and using '' ...

Yo:{D Dragon here for an early review day review. I have to say this was a very dark poem but it has a lot behind it. I enjoyed it a ...

Hello there! Dragon here, and of course I'm here to review your lovely poem. I could feel the pain that lay within this poem, but maybe a few things to ...

Dragon here of course:D Well, let me start off with this: *BEARHUG* see that? That means your not alone, you have friends, certainly in me:D Now for the review, there ...

Bonjour:D Dragon here, posting a review, of course. Well I must say this poem was, interesting. Let's begin, shall we? Lonesomeness sinks into my (there should be no space between ...

Dragon here, reviewing my new minions first poem, so congrats:D Boy, does it feel good to review again, and this poem has a feel good sense to it, but I ...

Hello whitewolf! I have to say this was a very interesting way to rewrite a story as old as time. I like the way the story unfolds, and gives things ...

Hello, there! Dragon here. Your story was a very interesting read I must say. The way you wrote was spot on. My one major complaint, your dialogue. I find that ...

I like were you were going with this story! I'll find the other chapters, but I think you were trying to introduce too many characters, mostly their names. I suggest ...

Hello! Dragon here. I really enjoyed this poem and I'd like to give a few comments. Before I do so, I'll do a bit of editing. of the occassional that ...

I enjoyed this story very much:) It's one of those stories that you have to read over and over to understand the true meaning. I wondered if this was a ...

I have to say this... confused me. I don't understand why the guy was thrown in jail, why was there a thing about stale waffles? And rat poison in syrup? ...

Hey! I have to say that this is a very unique poem. There were a few that seem off to me, but makes it stand out from the rest. However, ...