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Re: Needle in a Haystack
Hey anony :) I'm reviewing this to get points for my team! *evil grin* '[The Long Version]' isn't part of the poem right? I assume so. Anyway, I'll do the ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Merely Existing
Happy September Review Day! I don't have much to say, I like your piece and there's not much I would pick on. But, I do have a few little nitpicks... ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Philharmonic French Doors
Happy September Review Day!! It’s hard to believe that it’s only the first day of school. I'm beginning with the end. And oh my goodness, I love this line. It's ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Revenge
Hello! I'm here to review! Okay... so I review by writing as I read. So yeah, here goes. Personally I had to read the first paragraph a few times to ...
Sep 25, 2014 -
Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 7: For Reasons Unknown
Hello! I haven't read your other chapters so I'm sorry if I pick on something which would make sense if I had read them! ...even after the sun made one ...
Sep 22, 2014 -
Re: Ode To My Significant Other
Aww
Sep 21, 2014 -
Re: Sneak Peak... VOTE!
Book 1 sounds exciting! If you don't mind me making a suggestion, though, I think he should have at least one person going with him. Unless his friends come in ...
Sep 11, 2014 -
Re: Nursery Rhyme
Wow. I don't even know what I should think about this. This should be filed under comedy, it's that funny. :P I'm sure if you wrote this seriously or just ...
Sep 11, 2014 -
Re: On a thin line
Hello! I'm going to attempt to review this. Let me just say that it's going to be difficult because this is so short, simple and blunt. I actually really like ...
Sep 1, 2014 -
Re: Twilight
Hello! I'm just going to break this down and write my thoughts. :) I am holding on to the desperate sun- So I understand that the sun is setting, but ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Turning upside down
Hello! I'm here to say what I like and don't like... but most of it is like. ;) At first it was merely a suspicion, A harmless seedling. But time ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Last Stand Chapter 3: The Start of a Beginning Part 2 (Reframed)
Hello! ...Proofread twice? I doubt there's many mistakes, so to make up the review I'll pretty much just be typing my thoughts as I read. Hopefully you'll find that somewhat ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Walking To My Death
So... is this a Hunger Games fanfiction? Or fanpoem if more appropriate, I guess. That's what I view it as, but I assume there's more than one death game in ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Aragorn and Arwen
This is so cute! I love how detailed you made her quilt, with the flowers. They are flowers, right? They look like that to me. Your style of drawing is ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Salvation of Ignorance - Chapter 7.1: Not Ceased His Rampage
Hello! I'm going to try and review this chapter. I don't normally read this type of writing, but I expect you want this out of the Green Room, so here ...
Aug 31, 2014
