Dracula

Heya, I'm back to review this chapter! Your last one was a good introduction to the story, so I look forward to getting a glimpse at what's going to happen. ...

Hello! First of all, before I read your story, I would like to give you a high five for writing about something that's actually happening. I'm not if this is ...

Hello! I'm here to give a quick review of your work. :) There is absolutely nothing wrong with your first paragraph, it's fine as it is. You've written descriptions and ...

Hello! First of all I'd like to say that this poem is beautifully written. It let go of so many emotions and yeah... it's beautifully written. I did find a ...

I'm actually quite excited about this. I looooooove both Percy Jackson and manticores, so the first line got me hooked. The idea of the key is awesome, it's like Percy's ...

Hello! I'm just going to type down any nitpicks or thoughts that come to mind. :) And by the way, welcome to YWS!!! I like how you started the poem ...

Hello! Welcome to the Young Writers Society! You'll feel right at home here. :) First I'll just write down any nitpicks that I might find, then I'll talk about your ...

Oh my goodness gracious me! I could go on forever about how much better you are at painting than me. :D Seriously, though, it's beautiful. To me it looks like ...

Hello! I'll just review as I go, tell you my thoughts and all that. :D First of all. I feel kind of mean. I pictured your main character as a ...

I actually don't care about this sport at all (I have to tell the truth), I'm sorry. But my dad used to compete and he does care, so I thought ...

Hello and weeeeelcome to YWS! You wrote her frustration well. Your main characters sounds like she's dreading her new house. Although, I do suggest that you mention in the first ...

Hello! I like the title of your story, it's really catchy. :) Beyond the skyscrapers and buildings and the time-consuming traffic, the dark alleys of New York are less feared. ...

Thanks for tagging me! I'm loving the friendship that is developing (or, I should say, has already been developed) between Madder and Percy. It's so cute how Madder leans on ...

Wow this is a hilarious piece! I love how you put percentages and lots of other little comments in the brackets, it added to the humour as well as the ...

Hello! I'm a little confused by the format of the poem. Which way do you read it? I understand the first line, of course, and the 'This is the end ...