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Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 8
Hello again, haredrier! So you're awake, that's good. All things considered we haven't taken that much damage, but I wouldn't recommend getting up just yet. You are getting really good ...
Sep 30, 2016 -
Re: The Beast Within
Greetings, TheOtakuLord! :) What grasped my attention the moment I started reading was the beautiful language you used. Phrases like until day and night could no longer be told apart ...
Sep 30, 2016 -
Re: A walk to be cherished!
Hey there, Snehaaneginhal, and a big (super big!) welcome to the Young Writers Society! I hope you love it here, which I'm sure you will. :) Though this piece was ...
Sep 30, 2016 -
Re: 09.27.16: Original Work #1
Oh my goodness me, how does one even go about reviewing a drawing?? Firstly, it's super cute! The hair is perfect for this style, and the curves and spikes are ...
Sep 30, 2016 -
Re: Our Song
Hey there, GG4560, and welcome to the Young Writers Society! I hope you're enjoying yourself here. :) Since the title of this was 'Our Song', my mind got the idea ...
Sep 30, 2016 -
Re: Irradiate -- Chapter 1
Hey there, ChiravianSkies! I'm not a fan (or anything, really) of Overwatch, but I thought this work looked lonely so I'd come and review it! :) Jamie Fawkes was a ...
Sep 30, 2016 -
Re: My emotional puzzle.
Hey there, RadiantShadow! This is a pretty cool piece. What stood out the most to me was how you broke it in the middle and split the poem into two ...
Sep 29, 2016 -
Re: 3:39AM
Hey there, mavisknightley! I have time for a short review, so I thought I'd give this a read. Or should I say, sing in my head? I don't think there's ...
Sep 28, 2016 -
Re: Red Dawn Lone Ranger: Invasion of America
Hey there, twistedracer01. As you say, you're still working on this, so I won't go through typos. I'll just look at the story. I was stepping out to head to ...
Sep 27, 2016 -
Re: Frost Lark News 9/26/16
So I thought I had to follow this up and see what the fuss is about. :) I'm glad I did. Now to all the random thoughts that entered my ...
Sep 26, 2016 -
Re: To Be a Dragonry Pt 2
Hey there, Dibidub! I really enjoyed reading this. The language you use is simple (no massive words) but really descriptive. Your amazing imagery helped me imagine each scene vividly in ...
Sep 26, 2016 -
Re: Killer Beauty - PT I
Here there, scribbleinks, and Happy Review Day! She was highly photogenic, which made her one of her company's best models. You use 'her' a lot in this paragraph, and it ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: Frost Lark News 9/18/16
Hey there, Sheyren, and Happy Review Day! And, though I shouldn't be writing such an unprofessional statement, I must say. We are doomed. I reckon that a colon would suit ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: Pseyechia; Chapter 1.2: A News Story (Edited)
Hey there, GeorgiaMasonIII, and Happy Review Day! I too have constantly blabbered on whilst writing my NaNo novels, but it's actually a good thing! Even if you cut heaps from ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: Deleted
Hey there, Ishan212, and Happy Review Day! “They say that Diwali is the ‘Festival of Lights’.” It doesn’t matter whether it is a big festival like Deepavali or a normal ...
Sep 25, 2016
