Dracula

Here I am! I'm really hungry so I might stop after this review, but we'll see if I can review some more chapters later today. :D “What do you need ...

Hey there, Tsunami. You asked for reviews, so here I am! :D A cold wind blew over the ice covered Frozen Tundra. Gigantic mountains tower over the frozen valley. The ...

This is a pretty cool little piece! I'd never even thought about how similar the words are. As I read it, I was able to hold a steady beat. In ...

And... it's me again, back for the latest chapter! :D Thank god! I didn’t want another repeat of what happened in Kor and we didn’t have enough money for compensation. ...

Hey, kman! I'm back for the next chapter. :) These are really big chapters, which might scare off some potential reviewers. If you have enough points, I suggest you post ...

Hey, kman134! Happy Review Day. I'll try and help you get these chapters out of the Green Room, and give some helpful advice while I'm at it. :) I review ...

Okay, here are my random thoughts. :D The sentient frogs running Frost Lark's school system have escaped. I'm wondering what this symbolises. Frogs in the school system? :P They should ...

In my opinion, your writing style is pretty brilliant and I couldn't fault it much. There are just a couple of things I noticed... Now, as the sun hung low ...

Hey there, kman134, and Happy Review Day! Keya and I walked for nearly an hour. By that time, we were already 4 miles away from Kor. We stopped to take ...

Hey there, bookishminecrafter. I love your username, it has two of my favourite things in it. Books and Minecraft. :D Anyway, onto the review. “You have a choice,” the Beast ...

Okay I'm going to do the impossible and write a comment on this long enough for Yewis to count as an actual review. I'm Dracula, it's Review Day, so why ...

Hey there! Drac is here for a short review. I've only got one thing to comment on, to do with commas... Mark arrived at the Eon after walking for miles ...

“Get real, Kyte. Have you seen Tag’s reindeer nose when it lights up? It’s brighter than the Sirius star.” It's great to see a different 'type' of reindeer. More youthful, ...

Hey there, NightKaizer! I'm going to review part 2 so I better have a quick read of part 1 first. The name sounds exciting! Though humans saw them as reindeer, ...

Hey there, Lupa22, and Happy Review Day! But Danara was feeling practically the exact opposite. Practically isn't necessary here, it just draws out the sentence too much. wanting the annoying ...