DiamondForce99

Okay you first when your username is cupcake queen I don't expect this. I don't think I fully understand what you are saying but I get the main idea. As ...

Very good! I enjoyed that. As i read I could tell there was a humorous tone to it. I liked the rhyme scheme it added to the humor in my ...

Wow! Very nice. To me this seems like and old english poem (which is not a bad thing). I really enjoyed your, "Dreary not sad," and, "Gloomy not bad." Those ...

Title suggestion: Let Me be Me I really like this poem. It is modern and true. I rhymes very well and flows. It has a real problem in the poem ...

Interesting... I like it. It's short and cute. I have felt the same way but usually I am the one with the bad toothpaste tube habits. I think it is ...

I don't know if this is supposed to be humorous or not but I found it hilarious. Maybe it's because I am a girl. When I read the title I ...

Very Nice! As I read that I felt your poem was very relatable and easy to understand. I really liked how you used punctuation and separated your lines. There isn't ...

Relatable... I love to run too. I like your idea and subject. I think that you should find a way to make this poem flow smoothly. This is my advise ...

I like your idea for this passage. I feel that it is a little hard to follow. I found myself reading some lines over to try to understand what they ...

Very nice! This is almost a bio-poem. You could have some fun with it and make it into a bio-poem then you could put a name in it too. If ...