Desire

Poetry is a great way to express how you feel and I think you did exactly that in this poem! This poem might have a few errors but if people ...

I really enjoyed this poem! When I first read it I thought it was about people but then got the impression that it's about flowers?? Just few things that I ...

I have to agree with Liesonlies! The lyrics are really good and that's what we're focusing on here and telling us what's gonna happen with the song (although I get ...

I like how this has no structure and that you just decided to write it freely. That is what writing is all about and what they have forgotten to teach ...

I got the sense that my "evil side" was speaking to me when I was reading this. Felt that it was kind of a "dark and twisty" type of poem, ...

This is absolutely amazing! The emotion portrayed here is so strong and the imagery is also very powerful! I love everything about it! Honestly do hope that you'll be making ...

This is definitely one of those feel-good, happy poems :D I could just picture the whole thing as I was reading the poem! One line that I'm not quite sure ...

This poem is really expressive. After reading it I felt like u were trying to tell people that what they see is a lie, that you're actually hurting inside and ...

This is beautiful! I love this poem so much :) You've told such a beautiful love story here so wonderfully! I loved the part where you spoke about how the ...

Hi there :) This poem is very dramatic and descriptive, well done! Just something you might want to take a look at. The line that says "My tears banged against ...

I loved this!!! It's got such a beautiful message of hope among despair ! I didn't think the rhyming was forced at all (no offence to the previous reviewer :D ...

I thought that this piece was fantastic! There was never a boring moment and I felt as though it was taking me on a journey with each line! I loved ...

This poem seems honest. It seems like you aren't afraid to write about stuff that's filled with pain and heartache. It's a very inspiring piece that I really enjoyed. Looking ...