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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual
    Re: My Father owns the universe entire.

    Hello, Hello! Desdemona of Writing Wookies here for a review! I am always a bit unsure about religious poetry because I've never really been a very religious person, I am ...

    Dec 29, 2017

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Welona - Chapter 1

    Hello, Hello! Desdemona of Writing Wookies here for a review! What an excellent start to a story! I'm enthralled. You can keep tagging me for your next chapters because I ...

    Dec 29, 2017

  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative
    Re: The Groom/The Bride

    Hello, Hello! This is Desdemona of WritingWookies here for a review! This is a wonderful, emotional piece of beautiful poetry. In a world where one is more worried about money ...

    Dec 29, 2017

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic
    Re: Ballad of the Introvert

    Hello there! This is Desdemona of WritingWookies here for a review. I feel like you've done a really wonderful job with this particular piece. You seem to connect with it ...

    Dec 29, 2017

  • Short Story » Literature, Romantic
    Re: Losing the Light

    Breathtaking story. You're extremely talented with your descriptions. I never once lost focus or got bored while reading. As I am one of the most critical, nitpicking reviewers I know, ...

    Jan 19, 2017

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: The Last Light Companion [Chapter 2.1]

    Hello, hello. Desdemona here to write a review on Review Day Go! Woo!! Go Team Valor! This is interesting. I really wonder what happened to her and stuff ouo. However, ...

    Jul 31, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: Northeast: Chapter 2 [Original Draft, Read at Your Own Risk]

    Hello there :) Desdemona of Team Valor here to drop an itty bitty review on Review Day Go! Woohoo!! What an interesting plot! Though you neek to work on other ...

    Jul 31, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy
    Re: Starlight: Chapter 6 (Part I)

    Hello, Desdemona here to drop a review. While you have an extra solid plot, I have a few bones to pick with this. Sorry about that, it's just how I ...

    Jul 31, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General
    Re: Anyone Can Kill (Temporary Title)

    Hello, friend! Desdemona here to drop a review :) While your plot is rather interesting, I have a few issues to pick with this. Mr. Jacob Smith was a tall, ...

    Jul 31, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: That poor, poor carriage driver

    Hello, hello. Desdemona here to drop a review :) This is a very interesting story, but I've a few nitpicks to deal with first. Y’cildav awoke to the sound of ...

    Jul 31, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor
    Re: The Cave - Chapter IV - The Four Kingdoms

    Hello, hello :) Desdemona here to drop a review. I have not read your previous chapters, so you must excuse me if some of my remarks are unfounded or inaccurate. ...

    Jul 27, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Dramatic
    Re: Watching Chapter 2

    Hello, Lauren. I'm glad I got to leave a review before it was too late. It really annoys me when I get writing too late. Without further ado, I'll get ...

    Jul 20, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: Chicago Chapter 13

    Hiya, Desdemona here to drop a teeny tiny review. You've done a good job with this chapter. I can totally feel the conflicting emotions Gary feels, how torn he is ...

    Jul 6, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Technology
    Re: 360

    Very well done. Bravo! Hello there, Desdemona here to drop a review. I haven't got much to say. You've done well. Your grammar is impeccable, your plot is nice and ...

    Jul 6, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic
    Re: Hatred~ Chapter 1: Bullied.

    Hello, Eros! Desdemona here to drop a review :) Well hmm. This is only your first chapter so I will not say much about your plot as that remains to ...

    Jul 6, 2016


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