Denizen

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Hi! Hope you're having a wonderful day. I happened across this piece in the green room-It caught my eye, although I have yet to read any of the previous chapters. ...

Dozy-means drowsy and lazy, or sluggish and not alert, look it up if unknown haha. And thank you! I posted it here for proofreading, so I appreciate the assistance. I'll ...

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Ok, this is wonderful. You hit the mark when it comes to comedy, at least for me. I adore the misdirect. I also love how you've successfully implied the cuss ...

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Ok, this is wonderful. You hit the mark when it comes to comedy, at least for me. I adore the misdirect. I also love how you've successfully implied the cuss ...

I love how you've written this, it's beautiful. I love the repeated motif of water, and the abundance of imagery. It makes me feel a sense of wonder, and slight ...

also, in response to the sidenote-I unfortunately have no clue how everyone is able to format quotes haha ;

Thank you so much! I love all of your interpretations! They're along the right track, similar to what I envisioned. But they were intentionally abstract, up for interpretation, so of ...

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What wonderful use of punctuation! The short, stunning sentences are extremely powerful, and the pauses induced by the lack of periods creates a slow, tense read, one I enjoyed. I ...

This is heartbreaking. Poor little Tim-Eddie is wonderful, and I, even just as a reader, can relate to his struggle to hold in his emotions and act calm. I enjoy ...

Woah-I love this??? It's oddly abstract, in a nice way. There's a gentle vagueness to it, a soft air of mystery, with a wonderful moment of realisation at the end. ...

Thank you! This is a wonderfully in-depth review. I'm glad you enjoyed my little poem!

thank you! I'm very glad you liked it. I quite enjoy darker takes on the concept of love-as it can be a dangerous beast, if left untamed. This was just ...

I adore how angsty this is. The use of harsh descriptors really adds to the atmosphere. An easy read, for the most part. Though some errors-such as eyeballs being split ...

Wow, I love these. I'm given such a sense of sombre nostalgia. I particularly love the second poem. There are some minor issues grammatically-but other than that, the effect of ...

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Wow, I love these. I'm given such a sense of sombre nostalgia. I particularly love the second poem. There are some minor issues grammatically-but other than that, the effect of ...