Demora

Alrighty so I'm going to review this marvelous piece so far, gotta say just to get compliment out of the way I love how you've basically gone through the journey ...

Oh my gosh I absolutely loved this it really tells you about both the rich and poor sides of this world, I got confused a little here and there. So ...

Okay very soft poem gives a light hearted feeling to it that I like. Okay some things to fix would be= doimng should be doing so might wanna fix that ...

This poem left me without any words and in deep thought about it and many other things, and that doesn't happen very often with me and a poem. I very ...

Hello here to review this wonderful, yet tragically sad work of yours. So first of all the things I like, no loved about this was I got a feel of ...

I love this poem, the rhyme was on the dot, the slow was very good though the first two stanzas had extremely long lines in them it was still very ...

This really touched me, because it's written with such a sadness at the beginning but in the end they found God and came back to him and I could just ...

Okay so you captured what most guys are like, this l completely tells you how they are. The only thing I think you could fix would be your lines on ...

Wow is all I can really say, no scratch that I have no words. You've stolen them from my lips after reading this piece. This is just to extravagant for ...

Okay first things first, I absolutely loved this. I could tell how the character was feeling and what deep isolation and loneliness they were feeling. Plus the inner confliction really ...