Demoness

Duckiee! I didn't know you write poetry! Better yet, that you were this good at it! I really enjoyed reading this piece. You've got great structure of your piece and ...

Aoow, this reads like a lullaby to me! It was really sweet and beautiful! The punctuation was a little so-so but other than that I loved it! I'd mostly be ...

Heeey! You wrote a poem about my dear ally the Demon! Tzz, neeh! I really liked the idea of this piece though, it's dark for sure but not in a ...

This is incredible! It's honest and straightforward in a... well, not so forward way ^^ I really enjoyed reading it and the content of it is just great! I like ...

Hii, I really respect your use of rhyming shemes, nothing sounds forced and it just ease the flow and make the poem amazingly good! I also like the repeated use ...

Heeyyy! THIS IS AWESOME! Really, really amazing. You're a very good poet, I like your style of writing and your stanzas are very well built! Good, good, good. I have ...

Okay, so this is a poem easy to realte to and you manage through your words to get your message through. There were a few flaws with it though. For ...

Aoow, this is soo Sweet! Bit choppy structure, but part from that this was quite amazing! I really liked it! I like how the title hints something tragic and horrid ...

Hum... I really like the content of this, I mean, you're very creative and use vivid descriptions and stuff. But as it is, it feels more like a bunch of ...

Kaay... so I get what you're trying to say and the underlying message is a good one. I just feel like the way you express what you think and feel ...

This is such a powerful piece, just plain truth! I like it, great title and the content is great - you really forward you message and maybe the structure is ...

Aah, This was sweet poem. You've got great structure and flow in your stanzas and the beginning was very good, it's vivid and urges the reader to keep on going. ...

Hah, this was interesting read! I like the mysterious little aura it holds... I have no idea what you're talking about but it was pretty cool that you let the ...

Kay.. so I liked this poem and the content of it but I agree with Dani it doesn't have any typical poetry structure... and of course it doesn't have to ...

Geeh, this was unexpected! I like it alot though espacially these lines; He plummeted down, and yelled back at me “Come, come, come fly with me” I agree with Icy ...