Demoness

Wow, this is incredibly good writing! You're imagery is so good and I like the dark aura that's hanging over this piece! Geeh, you're really talanted! The playful kind-of way ...

Simple but Sweet! This was pretty awesome, not much imagery but still alot of emotion, nice job! My only nitpick is that you should add some punctuation to aid the ...

This is really, really good! Very creativly written and beautiful and sad and... aah just amazing! There was a tear hinted in the corner of my eye at the end. ...

Helluee! I love the content of this, it's so touching and you're way with words is amazing! The structure though... it's not very poetical and it doesn't give space for ...

AOow, this is just beautiful and heartbreaking! The language may be simple and not that impressing but the simplicity of it was pretty great. My only complaints are the lack ...

Well.. the lines you've written are very good... but as a whole this poem doesn't say much. After reading the title I was surprised at the content of this... not ...

This is great! I like how you write down these odd but creative questions and then give them answers! Sometimes leaving the reader thinking is good, but it's even better ...

Perhaps your right about your title being cliché but it doesn't make it bad, I actually liked it alot. Same goes for your poem! I liked almost everything about this ...

Geeh, you're very VERY talanted! Your style and the words you use and how you use them... it's all just amazing! This poem is just beautiful, truly one of the ...

Hi, I love this poem! I can totally relate and I like the way you've structured it and even though I mostly prefer poems that are more than a few ...

Heey, This is a really good poem! The second half is really sweet and admirable... but I think that what the previous reviewers suggested about building up the poem differently ...

Aooow, This is soo cute! I think many people can relate too! It was written in a simple form with primary and secondary rhyming and even though all rhymes didn't ...

This is really, very good! I love the title, it's beautiful! When I looked at this piece from above I thought it seemed a bit choppy as the structure of ...

Heey! I like this poem alot! It's very vivid and full of imagery, you're truly a cretaive writer and you use very good, decriptive words! I also love the single ...

Helluee Destie! I really enjoyed reading this piece! It was lighthearted and just sweet overall. "When I sing I’m in a world, Completely my own, and it doesn’t really matter, ...