Demoness

Hi, my Charmander-friend! Demoness here to give you a review! So, for being new at poetry I think you're very talanted. This poem has a nice structure and most of ...

Haha, this poem is very creative! So unexpected, I loved it though. It's cool how you describe everything so vividly yet the reader has got no clue what was to ...

I weep in the black spring. The warm winds bringing ash from higher ground. Eyes stinging and hearts broken we climb. This stanza is my favorite one! It's not very ...

Old and worn, she looks in the mirror ; Beside it, in a golden frame, stands a beautiful face . Eyes, so full of dreams and hops now tell a ...

Wow, this is really, really amazingly good! Deep and touching, and even though it's short it's far from simple and you've managed to capture emotion and deliver your message even ...

Geeeh Dani! Once again you've struck me with your amazing skills of poetry! * This has got flow * There's structure, good, very good structure! * You use punctuation which ...

Scarliee! How fair is it that you're like the best SB:er and you write poetry this amazing!? Anyhows, this was really good! Amazing imagery and symbolism! Like sand through an ...

Haha, so this is very confusing, but I still see some great imagery and it's vivid even though it's blurry :P Cailey grasped most of the confusing stuff that could ...

Hellue Drama! Demon here! So.. well, I like how this piece flow and each line seperately seems quite powerful but as a whole this is just confusing. You keep to ...

This is a very encourraging poem and you manage to deliver the message real good both with good imagery, reflections and powerful lines! "You have the full potiental To be ...

Hellooo! So if you added some punctuation for the sake of it... structured this up a bit - like, divide it into stanzas mainly... I think this poem could be ...

Ohai! This is a quite lovely poem, but it has got no structure! Both Veritas and AnAmericanTeenager listed how you should have written it :) But part from the structure ...

So I guess this poem is pretty cliché and there wasn't much originality in it... but I still loved it. It was heartful and you've managed to capture so much ...

Oh, oh, oh this is good, good, good! I was hooked after reading two lines! I can't really put my fingers on what was so good about it, but I ...

Heey, you're obviously a very talanted writer because I love the content of this and the way you wrote it. But I really dislike your use of so many capitalized ...