Demoness

Hellouu! Demoness here and I'm about to give you what I hope to be a helpful review :D My alarm beeps to life, startling me out of yet another boring ...

Okay so... I've honestly never heard a poem read out loud! I always read them on paper, by myself and make the imaginary and rythm and all by myself so ...

Simple, but both touching and cute. It's hopeful... yes, that's the word I'd use. :) It reminded me a little of a poem I wrote myself, it hasn't even a ...

I liked this one! It was an ordinary topic written in an unusual way and the imaginary and the use of words were excellent. I liked the last stanza the ...

Oh, This was a really good poem. Allthough, as a few others mentioned it would be even better if you, well, expanded it even more. maybe using more descriptive words... ...

Haha, think it's funny how people "reviewed" this! HAHA. But it was interesting, I got to write my own... I just got all my goals scribbled down in my head. ...

Aah, this was really good. Mostly I would have complained about the irregular amount of lines in each stanza... but it didnt really bother me here. So... well, I guess ...

Aah, YES, I DID LOVE IT! So amazing, I can't understand half of it but it doesnt matter, whatever it means I'm sure it's epic! Haha, Naah, But this is ...

Oh my god! This is some of the best things I've ever read! This is the sort of things I want to write, meaningful stories! AMAZING! I loved it! The ...

The imaginary and the story behind this piece is amazing. The only thing that I was a bit disturbed by was the different lengths and rythms of the lines. There ...

This was interesting... I had a little trouble following at first but when i re-read it I think I got it right. I really liked the last four lines, all ...

Aaah, this is so great. The title really caught my interest and made me curious. Often the titles are better then what's inside the poem but you managed to keep ...

Naah, I got it! It's an interesting thought, a good theory x) But maybe it's in the wrong forum, "Dramatic Poetry" this was more of a "Philosofic Thought" ;)

I love the stanzas and rhyming and all.... It's well written, but it didnt really touch me... it was more like a well-written text that flowed good and my mouth ...

Okay, so, to begin with, I like the story within this ALOT, the message and all was really clear. Allthough, what could've been better was your way of building the ...