Don't You Love?

You are the charmer
The one who lures
Innocent hearts into your trap Too loooong
You know your way in
You’ve got every map
Don’t you love?

You are deceitful and mean
You haven’t a backbone nor a spleen
You capture each heart you happen to meet b] "Meet" sounds odd here, perhaps a softer word? [/b]
Don’t you love?

You are distracting
Make it hard to concentrate This line is awkward here and it disrupts the flow
You’ll never get caught
You know how to calculate Too looong
Don’t you love? I like these endings you keep putting up here!

I enjoyed reading this poem. You have perfectly expressed the idea you wanted to. I liked the way you play with words. Keep up the good work.

I love it. So many are experiencing that today. I love it, the feeling and message that it has.

I liked this, it wasn't boring to read, which I often find in this sort of poem. The repeats of "Don't you love?" got kinda tiring, to me, so you could maybe play around with using it just at the end, or in a sort of pattern, or at the beginning and at the end. Guess it's just me! But yeah, this was really great, keep it up!

thanks a lot. i tried my best to describe a player, you see experience truly is the best teacher.
great review hun
xx Upile xxx

Aah, this was really good. Mostly I would have complained about the irregular amount of lines in each stanza... but it didnt really bother me here. So... well, I guess I have no other adds than... This was great!

Loved these two lines especially much;

When she mentions love
You sneak your way out

Thank u a lot hun!!!:)

Hi,
I loved your poem and you perfectly described a player xD
I have no bad comments for this (:
i really liked these 2 paragraphs

You are the charmer
The one who lures
Innocent hearts into your trap
You know your way in
You’ve got every map
Don’t you love?

You are deceitful
Two faced with no doubt
When she mentions love
You sneak your way out
Don’t you love?