Demoness

Dear Non-Rival! I found yet another amazingly written poem where you're the creator! The imagery was amazing, everything feels vivid and I can picture it all play out very well ...

Aow, this is so good! I loved it.. I wish we could've known more about what actually happened to James and Sarah and how the world looked after the disaster? ...

Oh Hi! I like this poem, it's short and plain but it contains a mysterious little add that capture my interest. Nice structure and flow too! I wish you could ...

Another brilliant poem by Aj! I enjoy reading these, short but powerful poems and I love that you use punctuation! When I read this it flowed so well and the ...

Hellue, My to-be-good-friend Horror! It's Demoness :) So, hi... I think this is a pretty good poem. It's got a little wobbly structure with stanzas that differ in length and ...

If this is a poem, I'd like some structur please, but the content is thought-provokative so that's good I guess. :) But if it's a mere question; Here comes my ...

I love the first line! And it goes so well with that picture you added! Anyhows... now on to the poem, the content is great and you forward your message ...

Hey, this is cool! I like your stuly and structure of the stanzas with three short lines with great rythm and flow that ends with a longer line that keeps ...

Hah! This is wicked good! I love your style! Mostly I'm annoyed at people who won't add dots but since the rythm worked so well anyways and you did add ...

Sweet! This was a delightful thing to read, it created a vivid picture of love and I like the symbolism with the butterflies. They are, like love can be, beautiful ...

AOow, this great! Sweet, heartbreaking and hilarious all at once! You managed with punctuation, the flow and rythm went on well even if since the lines differed in length a ...

Hellue! For being such a short poem it certainly grapsed alot and held both power and emotion. It had a great flow and rythm and yes.. this was really quite ...

Haha, this poem kind of began reviewing itself ^^ AT least it grasped the thing about punctuation which I'm missing :) So... I like the content of this piece very ...

Non-Rival! You were right! This is your best work so far! This was very creativly written with loads of imagery - I like it! But since this is me, I ...

Hello, I couldn't find any grammatic errors that hasn't all ready been pointed out so, I'll point out a few other things that i feel should/could be improved :) One, ...