Reassurance

by GracieBee62

Published August 12, 2011

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Demoness
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Demoness wrote a review Review · Aug 12, 2011

If this is a poem, I'd like some structur please, but the content is thought-provokative so that's good I guess. :)

But if it's a mere question; Here comes my answer.

Yes, I think most people feel like that... at times, but it saddens me that you claims to feel nothing but that, at all times. I agree with purple-shape... don't aim to become "Normal", because it does not exist. Originality is good! What you should aim towards though, is happiness. There must be something in your life worth smiling at even if there is darkness. I really do hope so atleast. Otherwise, here's a smile from me to you!

Hugs and Hearts from the Demoness! <3

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PurpleShade
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PurpleShade wrote a review Review · Aug 12, 2011

I, like my predecessor, am confused.
If this was a poem, it was a confusing one, in no real format of any kind, and it felt more like you were asking for us to be kind to you when you posted the actual poem, but you never did.

However, in response to your question - I don't think it's anyone's responsibility to reassure you that what you're feeling is "normal," because really, when it comes to that kind of thing, there is no normal. I think everyone has mood swings and problems, and goes through issues in their life, and I've certainly gone through some dark times in my life. Being normal shouldn't be what you strive for, it implies that you're holding up your life and comparing it to everyone else's, which is a recipe for a continuing cycle of depression. :)

So! If this was indeed a poem, and if it was supposed to be thought-provoking, it did indeed make me respond... thoughtfully... however, as far as the structure of it, I believe it needs work. Meaning... it needs to exist. :P

Respectfully,
~Purple Shade~

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SubjectBlue
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SubjectBlue commented Comment · Aug 12, 2011

Wait, was that the poem?



What will live longer, you or your words? Something to think about the next time you abandon a project...
— Omni