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Hey there Milanimo! Just then,the door creaked open. He whipped his head back to the dreaded closet, to see it had been opened. I know he's schizophrenic (I love writing ...

Hey there Tessu! Welcome to YWS! There's something in this poem that I really like. It's the briefest moment, like a mere draw of breath, and I think that's what ...

Hey there again, Since I accidentally reviewed the old version first, I probably won't be giving such a detailed review this time, but I'll have a look anyway :) (Firstly, ...

Hello Audy! I can't remember when I've last reviewed a poem by you! My definite favourite bit is the second bit with the qualifications. However, I felt like "or no ...

Hey GDrama97, here I am as I promised :) Firstly, I'd like to know how much and what Lucrezia wrote? You state that she helped you in the process, but ...

Hey GreenTulip! I think the topic of the poem is very interesting, I haven't read anything like it before. I wonder if you have some personal experience that inspired you ...

Hi there, cupcakenx! An interesting topic! You often see discussions about this, but I don't think I've read a proper essay about it before! However, I didn't feel like the ...

Hi there gottahaveFaith! It's truly inspiring to hear your story and for that reason I wish that I wasn't here to review this piece. My intentions aren't to review your ...

Hi Anshira! Is this an essay for school? I think it's an important topic that more people should be made aware of, so it's a good thing that you wrote ...

Hey there, OwaisKhand! I was very interested to see this, since I love Disney, and I don't think I've ever seen any "extra material" on Jungle Book or Baloo! I ...

Hey there, 15253! Well this was certainly unique! As Bloodink said, I haven't seen anything like this before, either. It's interesting when writers think out of the box! I thought ...

Hey dianneece! I think you did a great job with this! It was fluent and it worked, and I enjoyed reading this. The dialogue was good and I liked that ...

Hello Sean and welcome to YWS :D Your writing is very fluent, which is very nice for the reader! It gives the impression that you've been writing and reading a ...

Hello, WindSailor! I thought these were beautiful lyrics. What kind of a tune would it be, have you thought about it? I think it could work both as an upbeat ...

Hey Fortis! Again! ;) Wow, this was really cool! It's always nice and refreshing to see something new. I have a feeling this is inspired by something that happened in ...