Demeter

You know, I hardly ever laugh out loud when I read something, but with this ending, I just had to. I'm sure I made a very non-womanly voice when I ...

Hey, Alyss. Well, at first I'd like to say that I think you should correct what thunderdude pointed out. A lot of things that I would've said, he already did. ...

Hey, Rascalover! Finally I'm here :) Okay. The most of your mistakes had something to do with punctuation. You know, there are a few places where you usually use a ...

Hey, Beckie! Here I finally am, but please do beat me up for procrastinating for so long. :D I've also been busy, but for some reason I haven't had the ...

Hey, Monki! I don't know whether you meant it to be, but the lines in the fourth and the fifrth stanza are longer than in the first, second and third ...

Hi, Clueless. Unfortunately I have to agree with Evi about the flow. The flow isn't always essential, there are plenty of poems without flow out there, but it's a nice ...

Hi, Ducati! When I’m watching TV and I start to smile With the corners of my mouth and my eyes I have to stop myself It’s true This smile’s not ...

Hi, Lily – here as you requested! :) Your description of the colours (e.g. golden locks, turquoise eyes) disturbed me a little, since Lisa's supposed to be colour blind. Then ...

Meyer: *eyes Nate* Hmm…he’s kind of cute…I know! Bella shall fall in love with Nate! Crack! :lol: I've got a cheeseburger and I'm not afraid to use it! Triple crack! ...

Hey, Ducati! Here again :) And yeah, I do also lyrics. Forgot to mention that. Well, I must say. The rhyming and flow work very well! So congrats on that ...

Here I am, Adna! Anything for you! How do you learn unknowable knowledge? I know all those 'un'words are supposed to be there, since they basically are the poem (and ...

Hahaha, Evi. That was great. :D However, a few things I'd like to point out: My heart goes to Google and your wonderous feats. You far surpass Yahoo; Comcast just ...

Hi there! Here as you requested ;) First off, I'm perhaps not the best person to review lyrics, since it's hard to make it up without the music. I felt ...

Hi, Amniel. I won't chew this that much, seeing as I already kind of reviewed it. :) why nobody understands me at all? This still sounds a little awkward, try ...

Hi, Vox! Finally here. You had quite a lot of unneeded words/sentences/expressions here, in which some of them you just state the obvious. I'll point out a few now. His ...