Demeter

Hiya, Swanton! I liked how you brought up the contrast between girliness and tomboyness, and the poem is light and fun to read. However, even though I like rhyming poems, ...

Hi there, Confusion! You certainly have an interesting piece here, and I must admit I quite liked it! I'm not too familiar with this kind of line breaks, but what ...

Hi there, Awake! I saw this had no reviews yet so I decided to drop in :) My heart races and pounds in my ears I reel my heavy breath ...

Hey Wish! Let's see here. When I was reading this poem, there were bits that felt a little out of place, and I think it's because you have different rhyme ...

Hi, Hannah. tears bubble out between the earth I got a feeling that "bubble out" was slightly too dramatic for this. You know, it was a bit like "fairiesponiespinkcupcakesmagicDEATHglitterflowersroses

Hi, Shina. Here is the review I promised and forgot about... *shifty eyes* Sorry for the wait! The sky was on fire. Hidden behind thousands of dancing clouds was the ...

Hi, Blinky. Rows of red patterned in with the sun I have to say, I like what you had before: "Red in the sky was striped with the sun", because ...

Hi, Marsmars! I haven't read your work in ages, although it's more like I haven't read anything in ages. If I could leave you (comma here?) I'd break free unlock ...

Tjänare Fortuna! I was interested in reading this, since I'm still fascinated by fairytales. I'm glad people still write them, because honestly I haven't seen very many of those in ...

Moi Anssi! I saw this work as one of the random works, and when I saw its author, my first thought was "LOL." :D BUt definitely in a good way, ...

Hi, Megan! Here I am as you requested :) My dad was coming to pick up Will and me at around eleven, so we had another hour, or so to ...

Hi, Kaityjay! I close my eyes to drown in my pain. I feel alone. I feel scared. This stanza isn't a very balanced way to start, since you have one ...

Hi, Gal! Wow. This poem is a handful and mouthful and brainful, but I like it. Because I still don't see myself as a true poet, I usually think a ...

Hi Ryan! Sorry for the long wait, I hope it's okay. Just Brilliant. Why capitalize brilliant? =) my eyes wandered to the constant view I could see outside. Lots of ...

Hi, Meep! I'm so so so sorry you've had to wait for this long! I feel so horrible. :( (I haven't read other people's comments, so there might be something ...