Demeter

Hi there DrFeelGood, and happy review day! I found the title really intriguing and wanted to read more immediately. I'm assuming, based on the first and last lines, that this ...

Sarah! I'm really excited to have another story by you to read after Hayden! Firstly, I love the premise. This'll be perfect summer reading, I'm sure! I read this already ...

Hi, Tiernan! I really like these kind of poems that create imagery using simple words of the English language. Like here, you don't have any words that are that special ...

Hi there, Mahima, and welcome to YWS! All in all, I think you captured well the hopes and dreams we attach to certain ages. I remember feeling a bit like ...

Hi there Andy! I guess my first and most obvious question/point of wonderment is that I'm not sure what exactly this is... I guess that's why it's in "Other"! It ...

Hi there Rituparna! Welcome to YWS! :D You have a nice, kind of hopeful premise here. There's something lovely about the "aliveness" of the poem. However, I also felt that ...

Hi there IceWinifredd! First of all, well done on writing lyrics - I always think it's so hard! I mean, I don't really do it, probably that's why... The first ...

Ahhh it's the last part I moved passed the podium This should be past - but you do it in the rest of the sentence, so this was probably just ...

Hey! Almost the last part! Omg that title, the suspense continues!! Okay, so I’m kind of getting the feeling I got when Eugene said he’d get expelled because of bad ...

Okay, Sarah! I liked this like two days ago but didn't have time to submit a review until now! Also can I just say that I'm super excited I didn't ...

Sarah! Omg omg I knew it, I knew he was Hayden, but still you kept up with that sweet torturous build-up and I couldn't be sure but omg. I cannot ...

Hey-again-Sarah! I love “a suitably lethal amount of disdain”! “Freddie, are you drunk or what?” This made me laugh a bit, because it’s exactly what crossed my mind when I ...

Hey Sarah! Here it comes - my first red star review! Ahhhh! I like how this part starts immediately where the previous one left off. I like your descriptions of ...

Hey again, Sarah! Oooh, I just remembered something about part 1 that I wanted to say. So like I said, I read the unedited version, and when I checked some ...

Hey Sarah! First of all congratulations on your amazing greenness! So, I kind of read until part #3 last night in bed, so I thought I’d better get back and ...