Demeter

Hi once again, Sarah! Yeah, the formatting is a glitch, so I'll just try to do my best without seeing the real form. :) I think I like this better ...

Hey, John Locke! Welcome to YWS! :) This was so cool. Good job on going into the action immediately - it always irritates me a bit when writers ramble on ...

Hi again Sarah! I'm excited to look at your work :) Hair like fire, she is amazing Skin like freckled porcelain, she is indifferent Eyes like a green ocean, she ...

Hi there! First and foremost, I'd like to remind you that always proofread and/or spellcheck your work before posting! That way you'll avoid mistakes like these: The battle feild field ...

Hey, Brokenmemo! Welcome to YWS! What a cool idea you have here! Why so short though? :o I'm sure that all of us who have read this would have been ...

Hi, Angelorchid! Welcome again ;) I haven't read the other reviews, so I apologise in advance if I repeat something that has already been said! This was very sweet (at ...

Hi, MaKriege! Welcome again to YWS! Mmmm more rhyming poetry. ^_^ I love it! You did a very nice job with both the rhymes and rhythm, and there weren't many ...

Hi Rieda! What a pleasure to see you around! :) Even if you don't remember me! This poem was absolutely delicious! I just said to someone how I enjoy reading ...

Hi there, HHemayed! When I skimmed this through quickly, I wasn't sure whether I would like it very much, but when I read it properly, I found that this was ...

Beeecks! So I finally read this! I’m so sorry that I didn’t earlier >__< You sent it to me ages ago! is bad Anyway! I’ll point out a few things ...

Hi, Eloise! Nice to meet you! :) The first overall impression I got when reading this was "woah. She knows how to describe!" You write absolutely beautiful descriptions, Eloise (almost ...

Hi Dreamwalker! I like this - you paint effortlessly lovely pictures with your words, and they give me sort of a calm feeling, which is nice. I think the second ...

Hey, ROD! Wow, this was pretty intense! I really liked how you were able to create a tense, suspenseful atmosphere in this and keep it up through the whole short ...

Hi, Evie! Welcome to YWS! :) Suicide Point. Its name pretty much explains itself. It was where people went to die. This is a very powerful beginning and I like ...

Hey Daughter! Hope you're doing well! I really like these sort of short and simple poems that consist of pretty much just one thought or image. I can't help but ...