Deifyance

Messenger! It's Deifyance here with a late review. I'll review this first then the edited prologue after! I'm beginning to really see your particular strengths and weaknesses as a writer ...

Messenger! Buddy! Deifyance here a bit late for a review! This is pretty dang good! I thought it was a bit short for a first chapter, it seems like this ...

Hey! Sorry I'm a little late, but I'll try to give you some stuff you can work on! I really like what you have here in terms of a prologue. ...

Hey! Deifyance here reviewing your uber-cool story! Since I'm part of the writers who believe that grammar is for the editors, I'll just focus on the fun stuff. You start ...

Hey there! Deifyance here for a review! Lets start right off with letting you know I like the poem! I like your style, it's different from others. Don't change that. ...

Nice! At first I was put off by the rushed pace, the complete lack of detail, and the seemingly overzealous/half-baked main character. I wondered where all the detail was! Was ...

Wow! I really liked this! I don't usually read poetry but this is perfect! Now let me explain why. One word: Simple. You use every word to its fullest. The ...

Hey, there! Deifyance here to throw something sort of like a review at your story. This is cool! You describe scenes and places and things well. However, you could tighten ...

Hey, there! Deifyance here with a little brief review-thing. First off, I like your heart. You can convey emotion through your lyrics well. Your rhymes are solid and that makes ...

Hello! My name is Deifyance and I'll be doing a brief review for you! First off, this is a great prologue. I don't usually like prologues, but I felt this ...

Decided to redo the review. I didn't feel like I got my point across, while still expressing the awesomeness I was feeling. This story is awesome. Pure and simple. Harry ...

Hello! My name is Deifyance and I'm going to give a quick review! First off, this is fantastic! The action seemed to flow well, and your description was amazing. I ...

Hey there, I'm going to attempt to give a brief review of this quite astounding work you have here. First off, I would say that I agree with much of ...

Well, hello! My name is Deifyance and I'll be reviewing your short, creepy piece. I like your style. You have a certain flow to your words that I really enjoy, ...

Hello! My name is Deifyance and I'll be doing a relatively brief review of this amazing piece of work! :D I believe I made a comment on the last version; ...