DeathBecomesHer

I know a lot of the comments will ask if this is from a guy or girls point of view. but personally, they are missing a huge point. The beautiful ...

I like where this is going. Everyone loves a good old stalker case. It adds interest and suspense to the story. I would suggest, keeping your paragraphs a little shorter, ...

oooooooooooooooo i like this alot. i love the metaphor of the snake and the noose and Oo boy i love this. i like the feeling of unease that comes with ...

Hello depressed friend! this hit me really hard. i struggle with all of these thoughts, and the constant feeling of unloved is dreadful. You really opened up your heart in ...

This is interesting. You know that saying that goes along the lines of "you never truly feel old"? those are the vibes I'm getting from this. Its a huge fear ...

As someone who has intense arachnophobia, this was horrifying. Which is exactly the way you want someone to feel when they read a horror piece like this. Holy cow man ...

Greetings and salutations! I love love love this idea. I would love to see you introduce more main characters and more storyline cause I think this is off to a ...

oh boy...this was something alright XD. I mean that in a very good way. to me, this was more dark then romantic, but at the same time, it was a ...

okay I LOVE THIS. I love this kind of humor. I always like things that don't fit into stereotypes and this is a whole 'nother box when it comes to ...

This fits in very well with the "princess doesn't want to marry the prince shes betrothed to" stereotype. But here's the thing, i sense there's more to it. I must ...

wow.....this is great dude! You know I've always liked your work, but each time I read another piece I am blown out of the water! This was heart-wrenching and you ...

wow....that was something. you can really feel the raw emotion in this piece and as someone who struggles with thoughts like these, i can sadly relate. i really love this ...

I really like the idea you have going with this! I would suggest having a little more structure when introducing characters so its not as confusing. it was a little ...

holy moly, you only did this in 5 minutes? impressed doesnt quite sum up the emotion im feeling right now. ive read some of your other poems and my word, ...

as someone who deals with self hate/doubt, this was sadly relatable. but that's why we like poetry right? because poetry opens the soul, it lets other people know that they ...