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Hey Niraco! I decided it was time to read your story! I have read the previous chapter to this one so I would be able to understand and get where ...

Ooh a new chapter from Shady! And a club! *subscribes* Another fantastic chapter that makes it so hard for me to review. I love that we are getting to see ...

Hey there Anabel! I was so glad to see there was another chapter posted - it has been a while since I've been able to read any. And as usual, ...

Hey Alvarin! Me again :) I have to say, I will never get bored of your amazing descriptions. It's in everything. The way you showed the daring and flirtatious girl ...

Hey there! No wonder you have so few reviews - you write too perfectly for there to be a whole bunch of criticism. I could barely find a single thing ...

Hey Alvarin! Why am I reviewing such an old work? Because a review always helps and I wanted to read the previous chapters before I moved on to the future ...

Hey Gingah! I have a question for you! Why are you saving them all as drafts? If you actually publish them then they get a lot more shown in the ...

Hey there Jackal! Ah it's so good to see all this punctuation and all coming into it. I have to say, I much prefer the story this way too. And ...

Hey there, it's me again! So another interesting chapter! We get to know a bit more about Save, like the fact she has a tail! Also, her real father has ...

Hey there Jackal! I've decided to read through your story all the way from the beginning :) I have to say I do think you've got an interesting idea here ...

Hey Noelle! *dances* I like reading new chapters! And this was definitely the BEST chapter so far, I loved it. So excuse me if this might be short, but there ...

Heya Timmy :P This was pretty hard to review because all I could find were nitpicks... so I hope I think of something worthy of helping as well when I ...

Hey there Weymouth! Just a quick review here from me! I have to say I really do like this poem, you've got the haunted feeling to it going on here ...

Hey there Sunshine! I thought it was about time I read something of yours, and seeing this made me sure it was it ;) I also read the first chapter ...

Hey there, it's me again for the next chapter! I think this is a good continuation of the story so far. You've been hinting at another real life meeting for ...