Deanie

Hey Serene! Reading this chapter, again I am left struggling to find things to pick out. You've really done a good job of checking over these chapters before you post, ...

Hi Noelle! How comes it always seems like there is another chapter waiting for me? Either I am reviewing super slowly or you're posting pretty fast... hm xD Either way, ...

Hi Aria! So, I saw your novel up for adoption in the adopt a novel club, and decided to give it a go. I have a while to catch up ...

Hi Biscuits! So I have adopted your novel! I hope that the feedback I give now and in the future can be beneficial to your writing... although you seem to ...

Hi r4p17! First off, I am so sorry for it taking so long for me to get here! And I don't even have the excuse of having started school again... ...

Hi Fortis! Good to see another chapter up and posted! I have to say, this one is much better than the last one was :) Which I think is a ...

Hey there Ulala! I'm happy to see another chapter of this up and posted. As always, the preparation for the trip is continuing, and we're getting to see that not ...

Hi Timmy! YAY I am all caught up *does a little dance* Secondly, DOUBLE YAY for have genders by the titles! *does an even bigger dance* aaaand now it is ...

Hi Traunt! First off: You spelled Truant as Traunt in the title. I can understand the confusion with your username though! Okay, now time for the review. I think this ...

Hi Bella! I'm here to continue reading this story of yours :3 What I liked so much about this chapter was that we got to see Mercy's feeling of self ...

Hey sis! Well, we see things are steadily progressing. What I liked is knowing that this group of friends want to help somehow, and are not going to let themselves ...

Hi Noelle! Oh man xD I was so close to being all caught up as well! I guess this is what happens for being so slow :P Anyways, here comes ...

Hi there 90skids! I'm your new adoptive parent! xD Or more so, your novels new parent. I hope I can be helpful as I review this novel and all, and ...

Hey there Christina! (At least, I think I am correct?) I have been meaning to read your short story for a while. I don't know what age you are, but ...

Hey Therese! I actually really this chapter. I can find next to nothing wrong with it that I can add on top of the other fabulous reviews you've received. I ...