Dawnpath1

Beautiful. I really wish I had it. Honestly, right now I could really use a little it. This is all totally up to you, and that's fine. Let me start ...

I liked it, but I think it could've been beefed up, and it definitely could've been stronger. While I say this, I could also see me writing this up. Maybe ...

Huh, this is pretty good. I can't really tell you to use meter, because in truth, for this poem meter isn't all that important. What I will tell you is ...

It may be the timing of which I read this, but this is one of the best poems I've read in a long time. I like it better than any ...

Nice. This one actually makes me smile, which is what I was going for when I clicked humor. I don't always get that when I click humor so it's a ...

I connected with this. If this were on Facebook, I would like it. I can think of about 10 jerks to show it to as well. But for the review ...

I like this poem. I like it because it flows very nicely from line to line, and I also like it because it asks what a poem is. To me, ...

Stupid review for points system. Making me overanalyze a poem instead of enjoying it. Grrr. I absolutely hate critiquing poetry, but it's pretty much all I write. It seems like ...

Very nice, just a few things. I hate people telling me what to do in my poems, so keep in mind that these are just suggestions. Overall the poem's great ...

Hey Sileh. (Took me long enough, didn't it? :p) It's a great story, just a few things to think about. Charecter Development~ We all have ideas on what you're charecters ...

I like it, even if it''s not how I would've written it. I just have one thing that really stands out to me. It seems like you were trying to ...