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  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: smell of sunshine

    I'm not sure if what I'm about to say is an actual review, but here I am :) I have only one word- LOVE. The metaphors, the images,color palette- everything. ...

    Aug 27, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Long Pretentious Title About Skin and Bone (there's something wrong with me)

    Hey there anneonomus! Just like the other reviewers mentioned, I saw the title and decided to check the poem out. A catching title is always a good thing, so great ...

    Aug 22, 2020
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: Flash Fiction: Untitled 1

    Hey there! I saw your work in the Green Room , so I decided to say a few words about it. First of all, I'm a huge fan of flash ...

    Aug 15, 2020
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: The Aces High MC

    Hi There! I saw the title and decided to come say hi and a few words. Firs of all, I love it, I am a huge fan of shorted sentences, ...

    Aug 13, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Dramatic, Humor Re: Thinking out loud: The premiere

    Hey there! I saw your work in the Green Room ,so I decided to stop by :)I hope everything I write below is helpful to you. So let's go :) ...

    Aug 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: we are shards

    Hey there! I saw the poem and since I loved the title, decided to say a few words about it :) First of all- the title is quite powerful, and ...

    Aug 12, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: mistakes counted like currency

    Hey there! I'm here to say a few words. I hope it will be helpful! The poem hits quite hard and right, and I'm sure we can all relate one ...

    Aug 3, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Chapter 1: The Bolt

    Hi There! I'm here to review :) First of all- congratulations for posting your first chapter. It's always exciting, I know. What is the name of the entire novel, or ...

    Aug 3, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Echoes of Summer

    Hi There! I'm here for a review. Mine will be shorter, since as far as I see, the reviewers below have given great, extensive feedback. Besides the really beautiful pictures ...

    Aug 2, 2020
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Fake

    Hey there, @SparkySweet! I'm here to give you my few words on your song :) First of all- I really liked it. I know you've mentioned you've dramatized it a ...

    Aug 2, 2020


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