Darkbunneh13

Wow, this is really cool. It's just like your last peice; awesome! Despite the fact that the spacing is broken and stuff, it's still really cool, and I had no ...

Wow. This is a pretty cool peice that holds an awesome message. I like how you stated that opinions are important, but self-value is more important than other peoples opinions. ...

Aww, his bother is dead?! bugger. I was looking forward to meeting him. Though, I guess I did also kind of expect it. A really good chapter, and I'm enjoying ...

This story sounds interesting. I like the hints of other characters,like Mason, or a previous science experiment. "before all this stuff happened," makes me want to know what happened, but ...

..... Wow. This is... Incredible. In a lot of different ways. Like, tons. Firstly, when I started reading it, I thought "oh, this'll be one of those funny story things, ...

This is a lovely peice of writing. It's so emotional, and true. It highlights sadness and emotion due to shyness and an inability to display ones emotions- although, I'm sure ...

I love the ending, "there's no such thing as right on time," it's a fantastic way to end an emotional peice like this. I also understand how you feel with ...

This is a story with a rather wicked morale. It's clever for a short story. Well done. The morale is quite clear, and it is a story with a fair ...

Aww, such a sweet story. I'm so glad it came to a happy conclusion! The story flows really, really well, and I'm happy you posted it on the website to ...

Hahah, this is a clever poem. I personally am not afraid of spiders, but I know many people who act towards spiders on this way. XD it's a really clever ...

Hello! Firstly, I LOVE the ethical theory you've placed here. "Evertyhings a lie," "it's not as it seems' "our reality is being consumed by false pretenses " and awesome things ...

I'm not entirely sure what the message is that is trying to be conveyed, but despite that, I still like the idea. Iron flavored cherry-stripes? Is thay a euphemism for ...

Well, the cliff hanger at the end was fantastic. XD That's my first thought after I've read all of this. The descriptions in here were excellent, and the story itself ...

Wow. That's a really hard-hitting poem. It kind of makes me feel a little sad, because... Well... I've been there. I've never been upset enough to end it... But I ...