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Re: Pretty Packages
Hello, I'm here to review this! Well, first off, I loved the symbolism in this poem. It can definitely mean different things depending on whose reading it. And I love ...
Sep 2, 2019 -
Re: delightfully Dead
Hey, here to review! First off, I love and hate the way this was structured or put into “stanzas.” I love it because it’s very unique and I don’t see ...
Aug 11, 2019 -
Re: The Note
Hey, I’m here to review! This poem is a very emotional poem, to think of all the lives claimed and all of the similar letters most likely wrote. To know ...
Aug 7, 2019 -
Re: Under My Bed
Hey, here to review. I loved the picture that went with this poem, and the metaphor that connected the whole time about the monster. I also actually enjoyed the ending. ...
Aug 7, 2019 -
Re: Breathing
Hiya! I’m here with a review. To start, I really like this poem and I haven’t read anything quite the same as this before. I like the uniqueness to its ...
Aug 7, 2019 -
Re: After it's over
Heyyy, I'm here with a review! I loved this poem. You truly conveyed the feeling of hopelessness. I really liked the shortness of the poem, it gave you a punch ...
Aug 7, 2019 -
Re: I die
Hello! Im here with a review. One thing I'm going to comment on is your beginning was very rough, and the flow was kind of messed up when it transitioned ...
Aug 7, 2019 -
Re: Books
Hey, I’m here to review this poem! I’ll start with things I like: I loved your rhyming scheme, and it flowed pretty well. I also liked that you remembered to ...
Aug 7, 2019 -
Re: "Help! My Heads Stuck in the Clouds!"
Heyy, I’m here with a review! Honestly, for some reason I think you’d make an amazing kids author. This story flowed pretty well, despite the few run on sentences. You ...
Jul 28, 2019 -
Re: The last song
Hello, I’m here to review! First off, I absolutely love how you began this poem. It was very descriptive and had some great imagery. I also really like the idea ...
Jul 28, 2019 -
Re: Good and Evil
Hey! I’m here to review my 1st review c: I loved the repetition lines of “the warning bells are ringing,” it really sold the poem to me. I also liked ...
Jul 27, 2019
