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DariaTheGirlWhoLovesPizza

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Pretty Packages

    Hello, I'm here to review this! Well, first off, I loved the symbolism in this poem. It can definitely mean different things depending on whose reading it. And I love ...

    Sep 2, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: delightfully Dead

    Hey, here to review! First off, I love and hate the way this was structured or put into “stanzas.” I love it because it’s very unique and I don’t see ...

    Aug 11, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Note

    Hey, I’m here to review! This poem is a very emotional poem, to think of all the lives claimed and all of the similar letters most likely wrote. To know ...

    Aug 7, 2019
  • Poetry » Horror, Narrative Re: Under My Bed

    Hey, here to review. I loved the picture that went with this poem, and the metaphor that connected the whole time about the monster. I also actually enjoyed the ending. ...

    Aug 7, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Breathing

    Hiya! I’m here with a review. To start, I really like this poem and I haven’t read anything quite the same as this before. I like the uniqueness to its ...

    Aug 7, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: After it's over

    Heyyy, I'm here with a review! I loved this poem. You truly conveyed the feeling of hopelessness. I really liked the shortness of the poem, it gave you a punch ...

    Aug 7, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I die

    Hello! Im here with a review. One thing I'm going to comment on is your beginning was very rough, and the flow was kind of messed up when it transitioned ...

    Aug 7, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Teen Fiction Re: Books

    Hey, I’m here to review this poem! I’ll start with things I like: I loved your rhyming scheme, and it flowed pretty well. I also liked that you remembered to ...

    Aug 7, 2019
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: "Help! My Heads Stuck in the Clouds!"

    Heyy, I’m here with a review! Honestly, for some reason I think you’d make an amazing kids author. This story flowed pretty well, despite the few run on sentences. You ...

    Jul 28, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The last song

    Hello, I’m here to review! First off, I absolutely love how you began this poem. It was very descriptive and had some great imagery. I also really like the idea ...

    Jul 28, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Good and Evil

    Hey! I’m here to review my 1st review c: I loved the repetition lines of “the warning bells are ringing,” it really sold the poem to me. I also liked ...

    Jul 27, 2019


I love her dearly, but I can’t live with her for a day without feeling my whole life is wasting away.
— Miss Kenton, The Remains of the Day by Kazuo Ishiguro