Danceingtreeelf

I want to start off by saying wow. There are so many emotions in just a few lines that many people feel. I remember the feelings running through me the ...

Hi there Dancingtreeelf here, and I have to say wow this work was awesome to read. I really enjoyed it. It had me hooked right up to the end where ...

A review and a comment, because I really have to say when I got to the end I wanted to put my head though my screen and demand more because ...

Hello and before I get to far along I was totally sure that this was about the roman gods until the lovely word cat came in and then I was ...

I love the prompt and have written with in the past as well. But to get to the point, I was very engaged in this story. I only noticed one ...

Oh my! Okay so I fell in love with this right after the first sentence and was hooked right to the end. I do truly love where you were going ...

Hello killeham, I just wanted to drop a couple of lines about this piece. For one I can feel a good bit of emotion within the first stanza, but I ...

Hi Hereitstarts, Believe me or not I was caught like a fish on a hook by the first three lines alone, it made me think as I read this piece ...

Hi Forestqueen808, This is a very beautiful piece, but then at the same time I became very confused towards the end. Your words paint a beautiful picture but then it ...

Hello there again HUA, sorry I'm a bit of a green room troll as some would say, but at least I'm here with another review. This story is well a ...

Hello there HUA! Well I'm gonna start off by saying this was actually very hard to read, because it seemed to jump around a lot. Not that that is a ...

This is so sad but so beautiful at the same time. I literally had tears running down my cheek at one point. Your story really grabbed me and didn't let ...

Hi there, so I really like this story, but it seems a bit rushed you could say. In the scene where he is at the party it could have been ...

Hi This is a very good short poem and you did an amazing job of doing something outside of what everyone else was doing. The ending is a sweet irony ...

I really like the concept of your story here but I also found a few problems. (I'm only going to point out a few). Your grammar its good and bad ...