Daisuki

I loved this. The rhythm was really nice - it flowed well and your use of imagery was beautiful. The first stanza seemed very hopeful: one day I'll look back ...

Whoo!! Bandit's first post on YWS! Celebrate! Okay, so I'm not the best at reviewing poetry, but I really liked this. It was suprisingly good, after you said you weren't ...

If I had to describe this in one word - stirring. It was filled with amazing emotions, longing. I liked the rhythm, and especially the last few lines: I know ...

Wow. I was really impressed by this. It flows really well, and got me really interested. I wanted to read more, and I didn't get bored. This would make a ...

Wow. This was impressive and very unique. It really drew me in and made me want to read more. I like the flow of it, though I didn't like it ...

I don't know much about the 'rules' of poetry, so I'll just tell my general impression. I think there may be some puctuation things a smart person could point out, ...

I really loved this poem for the emotions. It's so somber and soft that it makes me either want to cry or stare at the computer all day in awe. ...

This is very poetic and I love the rhythm so much. It flows extremely well. I do not usually nitpic, so I'm not going to be much help in this ...

Ah! I read this poem before, but I guess I didn't comment on it. Anyways, just wanted to say hat this is one of my favorite poems! I'm a real ...

This has so many emotions coming from it - it really is an amazing piece. A little bit sorrowful, but perhaps some hope is there too? I really love this, ...

I like this mostly because it is filled with complicated emotions. Sorrow, rage, confusion, and relief. I don't know what to say about the writing. Considering that it was written ...

I love, love, love the introduction. I love the dialogue, but to be honest, I think this would make an awesome play rather than a book. If it is supposed ...

I loved this so much. I loved the love between the boy and the girl, but more than love -understanding. I think sometimes to understand is harder to pull off ...

This. Was. An. Amazing. Poem! The rhythm does remind me of Dr. Seuss, though. But that's a good thing. Personally, I think you're much better then me at poems! This ...

This was fantastic! So creative, and I laughed about a hundred times! I love the character of Death, and also what he doesn't like. Number four was especially funny, and ...