Daenyss

Oof. This is great. Really, really great. I like the lyrical flow of this poem, and the overall focus on emotion. You have a small punctuation error that my OCD ...

I just have to say, this is beautiful in how open for interpretation it is. I LOVE IT. A lot. This might be my favorite poem I've read on here. ...

Hi! I just want to start this out by saying that as a drama kid myself, this poem really resonates with me. I know what it's like to have seniors ...

This is great! Opinionated, but not so much so that it's a turn-off, rather that it's thought-provoking and interesting. I feel like the line breaks work, but perhaps if you ...

As a quiet person myself, this is really a great explanation of what it's like to be looked down upon for not being who people want you to be. Onto ...

Okay, first off, I love all the intended puns. It's made my day, as a lover of all things involved in this skit. Onto my critiques: You have a slight ...

Hi! So, I just wanted to say that this is a really cool way to express an emotion through the pure use of imagery. You describe actions and emotions, but ...

Hey! This popped up on my recommended list, and so I thought I'd check it out, especially since I've had a special experience with the line "Let there be light" ...

Hey! I thought I'd pop by to review this, and may I say great job capturing the mood of the piece in a short work! Bravo. Onto my critiques. The ...

As someone who's been in an abusive relationship, not physically(thank God), but in other ways, this rings so true. It's very real about how terrible it is, and I love ...

This is so frickin sweet. Can I just say that? I wish my S.O. would write something like this about me. Okay. You get my point. Onto the critiques. My ...

First off, thank you for expressing how so many people feel, including a younger version of myself. If this is how you actually feel, as someone who's been there before, ...

Wow. There's really not much to critique on this, it's so amazing, but i'll do my best. First off, I loved how you captured the lyrical feel of poetry in ...

Gosh. This is just so pretty. The flow is very lyrical, and is carried very much by the emotion, which is wonderful. I have two critiques: 1) the use of ...

May I just say that as a pyromaniac, this makes my heart really happy? Yes? Okay, glad that's out of the way. I love the lyrical feel of this poem ...