As someone who's been in an abusive relationship, not physically(thank God), but in other ways, this rings so true. It's very real about how terrible it is, and I love the second sentence, how it places the abusiveness in the tender moments as well is in the terrible. It's very real about how an abusive relationship is abusive in all aspects - abusive in using you, abusive in making you think it's okay, abusive in making you think that's what love is.
Onto the critiques. Really, there's nothing to critique. I could use a bit more punctuation here and there for the sake of pacing, but this poem is so short I think that it's honestly quite optional. The grammar is pretty good as well. I could do without the repetition of "my" at the end of lines 3 and 4, but it's up to you.
Overall, great job, and keep up the great work!
Points: 73
Reviews: 30
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