Curiosity227

Hi, Curiosity here. First off, well done. I'm not a good poet, even though I've tried to be tons of times. But stories and writing is my passion- that's what ...

Hey, Curiosity here. Okay, so this was a very soothing poem for me, and I enjoyed reading it. CupcakeQueen, I think your repetition here was a good choice. Then soon ...

HI! THIS IS a really nice poem. It makes me think a lot of my younger brother. I really like how you explained you feelings and many other things in ...

HI! So lets start with some mistakes. Its a great short story though! My hips rocked steadily back forth Back AND forth. This is really nice though! You should keep ...

Oh this is cool! I am sure Google would love to have this posted on a Google website! :D :P So This is a great humor poem; hmm... I cant ...

Curiosity227 here for a review!! Hello there. I have to say nice piece of writing, and this title really caught my attention. The past few days I couldn't find anything ...

NIce! ITS REALLY good. Perfect rhymes, and I love love love the beginning. Life's first murmur: Ava kehdabra This really hit the spot. Amazing, I can't really see anything that's ...

Ok. First sentence. The middle of autumn is A very good time for I think here you should make it like this: The middle of autumn is a very good ...

Hello. Curiosity227 here with another review. First, I say that I think this would be better written as a poem. This is amazing, you have amazing skill to describe something ...

Hello, Curiosity here. I love the way that you are speaking or the shy people all around the world. This is amazing. I would consider myself both. I mean, I ...

Hello, here is a review for you. I am not sure if this is the way you want your poem to be, but I suggest you have commas, bad periods. ...

Hey there. This poem is really nice. I really admire the way you really are good with the rhyme. Most of the things that I think you might want to ...

Heyya Chantal! Wow. Amazing poem. This is wonderful. Although here is some advice: Waiting There he sat waiting into he rain Ur whole poem is awesome, outstanding. But that one ...

Hey Timmy! I have reviewed LOTS of your poems. Firstly, First sentence:::: as I watch this night fade away into empty dawn... Ok, I was amazed at this amazing poem. ...

Interesting piece. Seriously. Its nice. Devoid of feeling, Nice beginning. Its strong, urging the reader to move on. Seeing only black and white. Here, it gets a little tangled. This ...