CreativelyWritten

Oh TopHatsUniversal I am beyond impressed. I love horror but I must say writing never really has the affect that I think horror should have. I do enjoy reading but ...

I try to say this on every poem I review just so that people are aware- I'm not really a poet. There are a lot of writings that can be ...

Haha this is a very cute little poem. First of all, I'm horrible at reviewing poetry so I'm not going to do that. Mostly because I only like poetry if ...

Yeah um... thanks for that. In the middle of my first period class and I almost start crying. That story... I started reading it and I was like yeah okay ...

I really enjoyed this poem :) Hope is a beautiful concept that I don't think enough people necessarily believe in anymore. I really like the flow of the first verse ...

Simple but powerful. The pattern you used was disrupted on lines 15-17 and it kind of threw me off. But I know that writing doesn't always fit perfect patterns so ...

I can connect to this poem 100% so congratulations on that. I find it beautiful in its honesty. I think it's something that everybody feels at one point in their ...

I'm not going to review this so much as I will give my thoughts. As this is your life, a true story, I do not feel as if I can ...

At first I'll admit I was hesitant to read this poem. It started out and... well I'll admit I'm somewhat of a simpleton when it comes to poetry. I love ...

Really loved this poem! A lot of poetry is about real life and people's feelings, which don't get me wrong I like, but the Heaven/Hell twist was a fun one. ...

I like how your story starts off with action. It grabs the reader's attention, which is usually a writer's goal :) I won't retype what Ghostly already told you but ...

This poem was great! I enjoy reading poetry... secretly, I think, in hopes that I can get better. I really liked the rhythm it had but I cannot place my ...

I'll admit, at first I was having trouble getting into this as I could not find the flow. I think it came from my ineptitude at poetry, not anything you ...

This was fantastic and really emotionally raw. Usually when I hear that phrase I think of sadness but in this case I mean anger. I don't know if you wrote ...

This poem had a nice rhythm to it. I enjoyed it even more due to the fact that it was not immediately prevalent but after awhile shows itself. I can ...